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Old Age

Rating: 4.9

The hand shakes
The back aches
The heart quakes
Then life breaks.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 05 March 2011

This is a sad but true summation of the way I feel as I turn 76 years young today. Good Write, short but true, Your friend Lynn

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Luz Hanaii 04 March 2011

Sad but true. Sometimes these short poems make a stronger point.

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Wendy Thopliss 27 February 2011

Got all first three, one more to go then goodbye.Well written.

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Leela Devi 10 January 2011

to the point as old age

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Riekairu Calo 06 August 2010

it is short...but true 10! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

The symptom of old age is nicely executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 26 March 2018

it is going in today. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2018

Howard, wow! cool! UGH! ! ! this will go into MyPoemList AND into my/our April showcase, found here: www.poemhunter.com/poem/april-2018-showcase-of-poems-for-and-written-by-p-h-members-some-of-this-and-some-of-that-some-are-lean-and-some-are-fat-from-my-list-of-favorites/ Thanks. bri ;)

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M Asim Nehal 27 January 2016

Nicely thought..............

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2016

Spot on. Brevity is the soul of the wit. Your poem illustrates that well.

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