The hand shakes
The back aches
The heart quakes
Then life breaks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
This is a sad but true summation of the way I feel as I turn 76 years young today. Good Write, short but true, Your friend Lynn
Sad but true. Sometimes these short poems
make a stronger point.
Got all first three, one more to go then goodbye.Well written.
to the point as old age
it is short...but true 10! ! !
The symptom of old age is nicely executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
it is going in today. Thanks.
Howard, wow! cool! UGH! ! ! this will go into MyPoemList AND into my/our April showcase, found here:
Thanks. bri ;)
Spot on. Brevity is the soul of the wit. Your poem illustrates that well.
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