Old Paint Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Old Paint

Rating: 5.0


Old Paint was one of the gentlest broncs
I've seen in all my born days.
He never would kick and never would buck,
Those were just not his ways

From the crowded herd with ease
He could cut any cow.
The way he knew which one to cut,
I couldn't figure how.

He seemed to read my mind, for sure,
And really won my love.
We really fit, the two of us,
Like a hand fits in a glove.

One day I rode to Hunter's Flat
In my pursuit of deer.
We passed a truckload of galoots
Intent on drinking beer.

'Have you seen any deer? ' I ask of them,
But only in my mind.
I decide to get right out of there
And leave them far behind.

For drinking men do not think straight
And danger does abound,
And when they've guns it's that much worse;
I'd best not hang around.

I've almost reached top of the ridge,
When I get a big shock.
Something slams me in the back;
I fall upon a rock.

For many hours I lie quite still;
I thought that I was dead.
I wake and I can hardly move,
A pounding in my head.

Old Paint is there; he licks my face
Just like a faithful dog.
My arm is twisted, my elbow
Stuck in a rotten log.

My back is sore; I have no strength,
Nor power to arise,
Then Paint bites on my woolen coat,
Much to my surprise!

He lifts me off the ground with ease
And leans me on a tree.
The night is black; there is no moon
And I can barely see.

Somehow I manage to climb on,
As clumsy as a child.
My rifle and my knife are gone,
My fever raging wild.

They've stolen my canteen as well,
And I've an awful thirst.
I've got to make it back to town
If I don't pass out first.

Davis Hollow is soon in sight,
Then we're on Bell Rock Ridge.
The moon now gives a little light;
And now we're at the bridge.

Then comes the snow; no longer can
I see a single thing.
But what relief from thirst I find
The open mouth does bring!

I fall asleep; I don't know how
I managed to hang on.
Next thing I know, I'm falling off
And landing on some lawn.

The door is wide, and there's my bride!
I want no more to roam,
But give some praise to that great horse;
Old Paint has brought me home!

Old Paint
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cow,cowboy,cowboys,cows,dark,darkness,drink,drinking,gun,guns
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
29 June 2016 first seven verses written and posted as part 1.30 June 2016 remainder of poem written and posted.Hunter's Flat, Davis Hollow, and Bell Rock Ridge are all real places on Cove Mountain where I have hunted in the past. Other than that, there is no truth to this poem. Old Paint is a fictional horse, and I have never been shot in the back. I have been shot AT, but they missed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 07 July 2016

Holds up well. You had me wondering if true. NMiocely written ta

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* Sunprincess * 01 July 2016

..............wonderful, enjoyed this write and I enjoyed the poet's notes, also ★ love the horse photo as well.... very nicely done

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Spock The Vegan 30 June 2016

Very entertaining, good job...10

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2016

Enjoyable saga. The second part made it evident that it was fictional and that you have fond memories of Cove Mountain

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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2016

Based on a personal experience? I look forward to pt.2

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Kim Barney 30 June 2016

No, pure fiction. Part two has been added here, so it is now complete.

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