Olives And Doves* … 1412-12 Poem by saadat tahir

Olives And Doves* … 1412-12



We hold in our palms
Many solutions to a quest
Also in our hearts
so close to our heaving breast

Blinded we balance
believe not what our eye sees
A sword in hand
ready to slash promising trees

Feelings left untended
sullied in much pointless jest
Waiting for somehow
to wrench from life its best

Nonchalant to approach
genuineness of an incoming crest
Stand on some pedestal
putting every word to a pointless test

We bob and drift
on the ebb and flow of waves
Seek out our bliss
in shallows of pointless raves

No warmth in hands
those that gingerly held with gloves
We grow the olives
those to sills are carried by doves

All this and more
fetching of the moon, its spree
Life silently holds
the plug and fates written decree.


original
14th Dec,2k12
Islamabad

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
* Silent observation at pulsating founts and inspired by the doves one sees in squares and plazas all over Europe.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 15 December 2012

The rhymes always in your hand, and again see you doing awesome in a vacation...this is great for you, and above all i love the meaning and lines...a fantastic work...no need to thanks, what you deserve just accept it..okay_Soul

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Sadiqullah Khan 14 December 2012

Nice Saadat, great message and well written.

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Yasmin Khan 13 January 2013

May God we find our doves and olives! A lovely read.

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Mandi June 06 January 2013

A beautiful, peaceful journey! A wonderful poem, my friend :)

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Soulful Heart 03 January 2013

olives and doves the symbol of peace.......................surmounting the fates decree........wow

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 December 2012

Aweinspiring poem and d title esp attractd me as a muslim both olive n dove r special n dear. I saw thousands of doves in masjidul haram in mecca. And many here too in Daresalam where i live. None in pakstan? Have been there too. And u say, 'sword in hand ready to slash promisin trees.', impressive! And i also admire d 'nonchalant...crest line. God bless.

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Zine Hadjira 16 December 2012

Great poem both olives and doves are nice to see

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