On The Edge Of Time Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

On The Edge Of Time

Rating: 5.0


On the edge of time
Many a dream crumble
Like the leaves in autumn
To give birth to the new ones
I wonder on this cyclical process
How the world has evolved around
Giving birth to umpteen dreams
The raw one remains hanging
Till it ripens and self-processes
Into shining bringing the stars
Twinkling all around

Wednesday, February 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 14 February 2019

Great depth. Sheer beauty. Human dilemma so artistically captured. A 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 February 2019

your spacing in typing brings out clearly the silhouette which in autumn more springs love shows the bit around it real imagery mine creativity yours MAN

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2019

Dreams are unpredictable. Sometimes, they remain a dream, just a bud, .never to flower. At the same time, many dreams have been fulfilled too. When dreams come true they shine like bright stars twinkling all around. I loved this philosophical poem, Asim ji. Praying all your dreams come true.....10

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S H 26 October 2020

Well done, the edge is slippery.

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Shreya Hacks 29 July 2020

Of course, this is wonderful poem in indifferent style.

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T Rajan Evol 23 July 2020

Wonderful poem related to the time and we call it our lifespan

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

scholarly writings............/// love it

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 14 February 2019

I wonder on this cylcical process...... A nice thought provoking poem..10.

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