On The Edge Of Your Heart❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

So nice of you to put your love on the edge of my heart, I will remove the firewall now to make the entry smooth. Loved the way you drafted this poem..

I read this poem off-line: I had to go 'on-line'- why? - I do not know! And, when we do not know why, we already know why: because, something within us was moved, and affected by what we read: this poem harmonised itself with my heart; or, vice-versa: it is authentic, poetic, and touches a depth I was not aware of; and that is what a good poem does!

A spontaneous philosophical poem, poetically conveyed and cutest created. I always enjoyed your poems, limericks or whatsoever. The language that comes uttered from you mouth is impreesing my literate soul, Asim Sir! I have watched you dance that tango. Unbelievable beauteous! FIVE stars.

Brilliant imagery just not exhausting anyway. Let the sun of my smile attract Your sunflower heart, To open up and dance with me a tango..... beautiful closure.

Good one. Dance me a tango With your beautiful heart Beating at a love angle Let them beat together from the start Let our love course through my artery And veins giving power like a battery Lets collabo on this one mate. Give us a verse and when done you post for D K Swain to read

This is one of your best poem.

I came to read it again...! - How many times in our life, we ignore our heart? We often do...Thank you, for opening my heart to feel again! Who are we without a heart?

Defying the security of firewalls........brilliant.......thank u, dear friend......anjandev roy.

Some wonderful imagery in this excellent poem.

The sunflower heart will open before the sun to embrace your love..10+