On Verge Of Autumn Poem by Nosheen Irfan

On Verge Of Autumn

Rating: 5.0

Sultry heat
A tad bit softened
But concrete is still burning
With rays of summer
Trees are getting ready
For autumn
A radical discoloration
A jaw-dropping
That would leave
The world
With a slight melancholy
Teasing the thoughts
Change is coming
Are you ready for change
A whisper cuts the air
Like a new knife
Are you ready to let go
The question drops
From nature's lips.

Jayne Louise Davies 04 September 2022

Wonderful poem x Thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2022

This transition, so well and finely noticed. An original and worth vision that takes hold of the reader,

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2022

Making them poetically and beautifully aware of what hardly anyone does notice, Excellent!

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Pallab Chaudhury 04 September 2022

Beautifully painted the Insightful observations... well done...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2022

Beautiful poetry. As per my intuition, you can prosper leaps and bounds. I suggest you to read poetry of Pablo. You are capable of doing what he has done. Go ahead!

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M.J. Lemon 07 September 2022

You've captured the coming of autumn....This verse makes me feel that the season is about to reach out and slap me on the back. Terrific verse, Nosheen.

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Bill Cantrell 06 September 2022

Outstanding poem, I have a friend in Lahore very dear to me, I hope you are away from the flooding, such a lovely poem, you mastered the English language😊

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 06 September 2022

Nosheen Poems attain an inimitable beauty, when they speak of Nature. This one gripped me in a spell. Enjoyed. Top score and myfav

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2022

Autumn painted with beautiful colours of poetic imagination, dear Poetess Nosheen....10 + Favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2022

A msrvellous poem that smoothly traverses through the changes with serene acceptance.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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