Sultry heat
A tad bit softened
But concrete is still burning
With rays of summer
Trees are getting ready
For autumn
A radical discoloration
A jaw-dropping
Transformation
That would leave
The world
Wide-eyed
With a slight melancholy
Teasing the thoughts
Change is coming
Are you ready for change
A whisper cuts the air
Like a new knife
Are you ready to let go
The question drops
From nature's lips.
Making them poetically and beautifully aware of what hardly anyone does notice, Excellent!
Beautifully painted the Insightful observations... well done...
Beautiful poetry. As per my intuition, you can prosper leaps and bounds. I suggest you to read poetry of Pablo. You are capable of doing what he has done. Go ahead!
TWO: but autumn every new year comes in different shades and speeds, Just think how exciting it is every year Once again I enjoyed this beautiful poem.5*****
ONE: The question disappears From the lips of nature most beautifully expressed this profound poem embodies the coming changes in nature, the same rituals every year,
You've captured the coming of autumn....This verse makes me feel that the season is about to reach out and slap me on the back. Terrific verse, Nosheen.
Outstanding poem, I have a friend in Lahore very dear to me, I hope you are away from the flooding, such a lovely poem, you mastered the English language😊
Nosheen Poems attain an inimitable beauty, when they speak of Nature. This one gripped me in a spell. Enjoyed. Top score and myfav
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This transition, so well and finely noticed. An original and worth vision that takes hold of the reader,