Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 64,036 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

One Heck Of A Suffering - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

I suffered because I loved you
You suffered because I loved you
I left you, you suffered still
I came back, you suffered more
Suffer, suffer, seems we must
Together or apart, that's written
Love's suffering will chase us
Be it my love or your fate
Suffering will go from soul to soul
Distance won't matter, nor proximity
We are bound in suffering, not in love
So let's suffer together, as one soul.

Topic(s) of this poem: pain, relationship


Comments about One Heck Of A Suffering by Nosheen Irfan

  • Pamela Sinicrope (5/1/2016 10:17:00 PM)

    I find your poem disturbing because in love there should not be such suffering. But I think anyone who has lived at all and love and let themselves be vulnerable has probably found themselves in such a situation. SO, as you can see my first read is that of a twisted love relationship where the feelings are intense but probably not healthy. Upon second reading, I see a poet writing about the human condition generally, not about the actual relationship itself. Well written and thought provoking. (Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/6/2016 5:40:00 AM)

    Together or apart, that's written
    Love's suffering will chase us
    Be it my love or your fate..
    These are so remarkable lines dear poetess.
    I loved them.
    ...We are bound in suffering, not in love
    So let's suffer together, as one soul.
    Nicely spelt, Great.
    Thanks for the poem.
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  • Souren Mondal (3/6/2016 2:17:00 AM)

    This is just brilliant Nosheen. I remember having spent five years of my life being in love with a girl. She made me suffer more than anyone or anything in the world.. Even now when I have long let go of her, sometimes I feel forlorn thinking about a love that wasn't..

    Maybe, maybe, if only we could have realised that we were meant to suffer - together or alone, we would have had a different life..

    So few, in love, get this reality.. I didn't until I turned 24.. Thank you for sharing.
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    Nosheen Irfan(3/6/2016 3:14:00 AM)

    Honestly speaking Souren when i wrote this poem i had no idea what the hell i was writing but when i got comments i found people could relate to it. May be for us poets its easy n natural to relate to suffering.

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  • (3/4/2016 3:23:00 PM)

    A painful relationship nicely put on.....in form of a masterpiece poem, suffering is part of Love and Hate both. (Report)Reply

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  • Arfa Iman Kalera (2/26/2016 11:10:00 AM)

    nice poem 10+++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Arfa Iman Kalera (2/26/2016 11:09:00 AM)

    you've soooo nicely penned your feelings, great work,10++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mithilesh Yadav (2/25/2016 11:06:00 AM)

    grrrt penned..... thoughtful expression of emotion.... liked it (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (2/6/2016 9:14:00 PM)

    Life has its suffering no matter what state we find ourselves in-we take ourselves wherever alone or together. A powerful perspective is here presented that can be the starting place of functional friendships and rich relationships. Well done my friend! (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/8/2016 5:33:00 AM)

    Love! ! With what one faces at tines. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/8/2016 2:55:00 AM)

    when suffering surpass happiness
    it's not worth pursuing unless you're
    masochist...
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/7/2016 4:04:00 PM)

    Having love and sufferings in life is a common flow but still we need happiness and sweet love. Very finely drafted and shared poem.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (1/6/2016 9:41:00 AM)

    We are bound in suffering, not in love
    So let's suffer together, as one soul.
    This is absolutely shocking, and unforeseen. Though the situation presents a substantial challenge to both the parties, it would be interesting for the readers to make their own analyses about its denouement. Thanks.
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  • (1/6/2016 9:40:00 AM)

    beautifully composed lines....I loved to read it...nice work (Report)Reply

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  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/6/2016 9:01:00 AM)

    A well written lovely poem :) (Report)Reply

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  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/6/2016 8:39:00 AM)

    So let's suffer together, as one soul.
    Very nice poem and loved the way it ended... Tilok Chand Mahroom ka ye shed yaad aa gaya
    hote hai.n KHush kisii kii sitam-raaniyon se ham
    vaqf-e-balaa hai.n apnii hii naadaaniyon se ham
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    Rajnish Manga(1/6/2016 9:19:00 AM)

    Thanks for such a wonderful critique of an equally remarkable poem. Reference of Mahroom makes a great value addition.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 6, 2016


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