Once Again! ......But Without Illustration This Time...[ My Response To Yet Another Clever Rejoinder By Loke Kok Yee (To Me)] Poem by Bri Edwards
Once Again! ......But Without Illustration This Time...[ My Response To Yet Another Clever Rejoinder By Loke Kok Yee (To Me)]
I love my title, BUT I have NOW to write a poem to go with it. (SHIT! !)
My PH "friend" Loke Kok Yee ["Bro", as he is known to me]....
....has once again done some very, very clever poetic writing,
and SO CLEVER it is that I'm writing this to share with thee,
.....my readers! I hope you'll find HIS, and MY, stuff "exciting".
{I do.}
I sent him and dozens of my PH friends "Brian Meets Another Brian",
a poem I don't plan to submit to PH, but.....don't any of you be cryin', ....
'cause for a small fee I'm willing to send my "BMAB" poem to you too.
For now you can find Bro's response to me in my Poet's Notes, new.
[see below]
Yes, I SHALL post THIS poem, and ANYONE bothering to read it through....
may be thrilled with "Bro's" poetic response, BUT, if you aren't, very few...
will care (INCLUDING ME)because I write more for myself and I know for a FACT....
that in.....MY POETIC response & HIS POETIC rejoinder there is NO LACK....
....of genius! !
Bro's poem, attached below, was in the form of a PH message, and so....
there was not an illustration, but often his submitted poems are AGLOW...
with a photo, exciting, and often emotionally-inviting. Perhaps check him OUT?
And if you seriously do NOT agree with my opinion, I may hit you in your SNOUT! !
p.s. i changed my mind and shall ALSO put in my Poet's Notes my "Brian Meets Another Brian" poem, before Bro's response to it. ha ha
(March....17th....2018)
Brian Meets Another Brian.....[ A Face-To-Face Encounter Brian Johnston And Bri Edwards A K A Brian Whitaker Pizza Party In Atherton! ! ! ! ]
At Applewood's Pizza on El Camino,
two Bri's shared pizza and some vino.
I won't say which did most of the talking,
but MY mouth was just (mostly)gawking.
He once felt he'd like being smarter X3,
but now he's content being as smart as me.
Neither one of us is in the genius category,
but each reigns supreme with Poetic Glory!
He offered to pay the whole damn BILL, but....,
though he has more money, i paid some still.
Our two hour visit was a first...for each of us,
PH poet-to-poet, face-to-face, but NO big fuss.
Now all i can wish for is to meet Valsa George!
On curry in Ernakulam someday we may gorge...
.....ourselves.
I think she'd bring, with her, her mate, dog, and gun,
but STILL perhaps we'd all have some Indian fun!
I would hope so! ! I'd let her pay the whole bill.
(March 13th 2018)
i DID put semicolons between sections of my title's extension. But it seems PH erased them! !
bri :)
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TWO: (Loke Kok Yee's, aka Bro's, message to me after he (supposedly read)my BMAB poem) :
Bri,
You mean in Ph there are now two "BRI'?
Ah! What joy for me but the rest will cry
PH was shaky having you around
Now I am not sure whither it is bound
Both of you claiming poetic glory?
All that is because you have not met me
Though others may think that I'm full of crap
Deep within me is a genius entrapped
How did Valsa got** dragged into this?
She would much rather give us both a miss
But for her curry with you I will go
And I know for sure that she'll not say no
Bro.
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** I objected (as i often do in poem comments)to one of the poet's parts of English.Here i believe it is proper to use "...did Valsa get dragged ....", NOT "...did Valsa got dragged..."; that is what i would use.) However........there are sentences in which "got dragged" would be ok with me. e.g. "Bri got dragged to the ice cream store, laughing all the way." OR "Bri got dragged behind the bushes by some tasty female 'bikers'; Bri was laughing all the way."
hee-hee.OF COURSE Bro's got-for-get may have just been a "typo"! ! !
bri edwards aka brian edward whitaker
bri :)
Neither one of us is in the genius category, but each reigns supreme with Poetic Glory! Now I understand that besides Bri and Brian, there is one more contestant to poetic glory..... none other than our Loke. Through his clever response, he is flaunting his credential for the title.....! Enjoyed your poem and its response (continued)
I see some truth in these beautifully humorous poems. Wonder what must have been the subject of your conversation when you and Brian met at the restaurant or were your mouths too full to say something? (continued)
Just couldn't get the word ' in after bigger in the second line. There must be an around erasing all the! Ho! Ho! Ho1
The truth is out; we are both full of gas And I’m not sure who is the bigger Valsa must be laughing in her sari At two clowns claiming poetic fluency a correction on my previous comment where the word was left out
The truth is out; we are both full of gas And I’m not sure who is the bigger Valsa must be laughing in her sari At two clowns claiming poetic fluency
A delightful poem to read.fastastically done and the rejoinder too was cleverly penned. 10 Nudershada
At Ernakulam (Cochin) there is a place called Curry where you get delicious Kerala cuisines. If you let me know of your arrival, I shall come with my mate and son, but no gun! If Loke wishes to accompany you, I will be all the more delighted! About paying the bill, we shall decide later. However courtesy demands that I should pay because you are the guests here in our land! But if you are keen to pay, I won't object! A very interesting piece! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 2:44:13 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I'm writing this to share with thee, ....... it is a great corresponded poem, excellently penned to correspond with your bro [is it brother? ] and PH friend Loke Kok Yee, loved it, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++ 10