One Complicated Question! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

One Complicated Question!

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Time trapped me into its web
Tides swept me into its swirl.
Situation fenced my thoughts and over powered me.

My unbridled thoughts fell into the well of fear
Where turbulent water tested its patience
Finally, I gave up loosing my confidence.

Choosing out of one was difficult......
Either to Live like a dead one
Or to die and live in everyone! ! !

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 25 June 2014

Question asked! Answer can be found within...nice expressive poem.

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Valsa George 23 June 2014

Great poem..... Beautiful diction.....!

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Colleen Courtney 22 June 2014

A beautifully expressed poem which asks that ever complicated question that confounds us all. Nicely done Geetha!

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Neela Nath Das 22 June 2014

A stupendous poem..............

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2014

Either to Live like a dead one Or to die and live in everyone! ! ! If every one adopts this ideal for living and dying paradise will not be needed any more.

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This poem falls on negative aspects of life yet by unloading your feelings you have done the right thing as it empowers you to fight things aright...............Geetha..........a nice composition strongly felt.................

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Life is to face the challenges and writings in this poem is sadness and poem is beautiful.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 June 2014

a powerful write, little darkly sad though.

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Amitava Sur 26 June 2014

Dear Geetha - why so much in a broken heart? ? May be you're through a leisure time relaxing a bit. Neither you are to Live like a dead one or to die and live in everyone, I'm sure you'll come up again. Don't worry at all. Be in a merry mood.

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Soumita Sarkar 26 June 2014

So true.............the dilemma engraved in these lines......I am grateful to you for not only reading my poems but also rating and giving your valuable comments...THANKS...

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