One Of Those Birds Poem by Akanksha Bhatt
One Of Those Birds
Those birds are playing Hide and Seek,
But one of them is very weak.
Now they start to compile,
Husk and grains with their peak.
But it isn't easy for her,
As you know, she is very weak.
It seems like, she wanna weep,
And now she start to peep.
She is peeping in her friend's nest,
Which is located in the west.
Her friend furiously told her that,
'She cann't live with them as they aren't mad'.
And now I realized that -
There is no WEALTH without HEALTH...!
At such a young age, I feel, you have got great talent and insight.A nice poem.I liked it.Thanks and wishing you a great life with poetry. Chandra Thiagarajan
meaningful..........and really elegant in its simplicity....... :)
I liked the way you have used the weak bird....... I like the parallel structure of the two stanza and the last two lines clearly telling the reason. Very nice.
Very good well written birds are often associated with beauty and the use of a nest as a metaphor very good.
Very interesting views you take out of nature. Birds need to catch up and create a welfare state!
Very beautiful and interesting. I really enjoyed this great read. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 12:16:18 AM # 1.0.0
great thought....! ! ! and i wish appreciate for that....good job...keep it up....: -) »so close«