Our walk to discovery
was blessed, with a
silence wrapped in
music, the songs,
the tunes of birds, and
the rustle of the leaves.
Looking up we see
motionless, unmoving
small white wispy clouds
tinged orange, brushed
by some unseen artist in the sky,
A rising filtered sun,
casts soft merging
shadows, and gives
a morning light, that
warms, comforts, settles,
opens, mind and soul
As we walk a probability,
an expectation for the
unfolding mystery
of dawns first light
comes over us, after all
we are looking for
a very special place.
We amble, moving slowly,
searching, looking, so we
can discover hidden
places, spaces, answers,
solutions, to the worlds
of mystery in our minds.
Then the melody stops,
Natures Orchestra quietens.
Now under the lovely painted sky,
the rising warming sun, comes
a hush, a stillness, a Golden Silence,
and a realisation that in our own
true Selves we are truly one.
08-09-2008
The universe is logically or aesthetically consistent and holding together as a harmonious or credible whole but still is a single entity. Seeing the oneness of life, and experiencing this with no Self in the way to distort it, is so very different to how the mind tries to project it. The mind literally has no idea how it truly is from an experiential perspective. It is always so much more simple and down-to-earth than the mind could ever imagine or comprehend.The center of the universe dwells a great spirit, and this center lies within each of us i.e., the oneness of oneself....I add this poem to my favourite poems list.....10/10
It is an extra-ordinary poem with true message. We are truly one! 10+++
yeah this whole universe is one................the one without second............as it is written in the scriptures in beginning there was word.........and word was made flesh................so there is onesss......good write..........
A truly beautiful poem and you took me on a journey of your discovery that unfolded nature and the oneness of of life on this planet. We are all part of a whole, part of each other, and nature. Yet some humans treat nature with cruelty and they are defying the reason for their existence, to be at one and love each other, and do unto others as we would do unto ourselves. I felt the magic in the air and heard the songs in your poem, which is such a spiritually uplifting piece of work. 10 love Karin
We amble, moving slowly, searching, looking, so we can discover hidden places, spaces, answers, solutions, to the worlds of mystery in our minds. Rachel Ann Butler
The last stanza gives a marvellous conclusion to this poem! 10+ Today I was hearing about -'The String Theory', - a 10 mins video clip, which uphold this 'Oneness'! It says the entire cosmic fabric is the result of vibration of nano strings, which create and re-creates all things! And God is the master conductor controlling this cosmic orchestra! I will be writing on this, one of these days! Your 'Oneness' is a cosmic reality, - Brian Green says! ! ! ! -Raj Nandy
ONENESS spills out unknown joy of the heart, which merges with the spirit of nature, in quiet transedence, in the midst of everything.really enjoyed reading this lovely work.thanks for sharing!
I am gifted to read the oneness........ the poem touches more horizons and towards enlightment...... the writing shows the fond of write with nature........great write........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a wonderful theme on oneness Its such an intangible The feel, covers the self as a whole Nothing much to speak or show. Its said to be - An open feeling, a sense of freedom A sense of contentment in knowing That you are one with the nature. Great write. Enjoyed the inner feel. Thank you.