Opening The Door Of Heart Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Opening The Door Of Heart

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I am opening the door of my heart
As East opens during dawn sings
With colours of golden red rays
I am sprinkling my each beat ever.

As dawn opens path for sunrise
I open my heart for your arrival
I am an open sky now you are sun
Oh dear mentor you rise in my mind.

My heart is filled with love roses
Roses spread fragrance of wisdom
You have sprinkled this in boon
Now you rise soon in my own horizon.

To perceive your interesting art
In this world I sing for eternity
Oh dear eternal super father light
You enter inside my heart with mercy.

I am eagerly waiting for new dawn
To see your new art of wisdom here
You come and reside here I search
I am opening the door of my heart.

Tuesday, August 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,morning,spiritual
Ratnakar Mandlik 02 August 2016

A beautifully conceived morning prayer of the almighty God requesting Him to show the light. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2016

Oh dear mentor! ! Seeing the realms of peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Beautiful sun rays opening the door of heart. It's no wonder when heart is filled with roses, the fragrance too spreads the wisdom. Lovely with spiritual touch. Loved reading it.

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Asia Villaflor 04 August 2016

for a poet like me who is too young in this filled a poem like this is a dream for me, the awesome words was echoing in my head and then imagining myself who has an amazing talent like you sir. the rhyme, the emotion, the feelings is perfectly expressed and easy for me to image what was it look like in an act.thankful for i for meeting a wonderful person like you. thank you so much sir.

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Valsa George 04 August 2016

As ever, a highly inspiring write full of piety and devotion for the Great Father above! A sure 10

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 July 2021

i love the stanza with the roses

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Rajnish Manga 13 September 2020

I am opening the door of my heart Roses spread fragrance of wisdom You enter inside my heart with mercy.... //.... It's all about celebration.... Celebrating the divine arrangement of things so serene and sublime that our heart becomes a link to all souls and to the universe. This is indeed a matchless marvel. Thanks, Kumarmani ji.

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Isabel Pimentel 07 June 2020

Heart beats with love. Love bears the heart in life. Human heart is wonderful. This is pretty rose and breath is fragrance of living. When heart beats for God, our purpose of living becomes successful. This poem is interesting and nice.

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A fascinating poem that affirms deep faith in our Almighty. A spiritual write mixed with the beauty of nature. Very inspiring.10

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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2016

What a beautiful spiritual write! yes by opening the door of our heart, we can light ourselves with faith, hope n love. Well-worded n well-expressed.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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