Or.... Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

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Rating: 5.0


Listen to the hands that knock your heart's door
You can open it or…..

Don't pay much attention to the accident's core,
It won't help you or…..

Leave the daily events, they are bore,
Can you tolerate them or…..

Show your warm smile to the people who needs it for sure
You can help a human by this act or……

Avoid from the life's dangerous tors
Because these tors will hurt you or….

Wake up for humanity and protect the rights of each other, please avoid violence and gore
If this life continue like this, at the end what is remain? Or……OR there is some people who concerns!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Hi to all dear readers. please complete the blanks with your ideas and words
Thanks
Elias
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 20 April 2013

brilliant ans so creative one.~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 15 April 2013

make a wiser of a blind watcher or... Beautiful piece structure and all nicely done.

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Captain Cur 07 April 2013

...opening them will be a Herculean chore.

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Poetheart Morgan 06 April 2013

We are all united as chain links. Better watch or.......

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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