Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Orange Disc! - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Up into the mount
suspended went
the disc of orange
round;
slid away and said:
bye! you my sweet dusk!

Desperate dusk said:
down you go to see
your dear dawn;
and tomorrow
that late, that long
you'll come home forlorn!

10 04 08


Comments about Orange Disc! by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (2/12/2009 3:11:00 AM)


    Sun caught between dawn and dusk- what a lovely poem, so unusual and endearing is your discerning eye. thanks Kesav. I really need to read more of your earlier poems.10 (Report) Reply

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  • (2/9/2009 11:39:00 PM)


    orange disc dawn and dusk.................superb (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2009 7:54:00 PM)


    ...a poem abt the natural beauty and everyday doing of the Sun..well presented in a beautiful way..color plays a beautiful role....Winnie 10 for u (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2008 6:00:00 PM)


    So perfect way of poetic description of sun's life like its corona when gaze upon with love in one's heart.......... (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2008 12:52:00 PM)


    ........GORGEOUS......so short yet so fluent and perfect. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/29/2008 7:23:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem with nice imagery, love it.10+ (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2008 6:51:00 AM)


    Its great how you imagination makes sun and dusk looks human in their feelings. Beautiful poem, thanks a lot for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2008 10:36:00 PM)


    What a beautiful poem about the setting sun.. truly a masterpiece of words coming together for the imagery of wonder.. (Report) Reply

  • (5/3/2008 9:45:00 PM)


    nice poem, nice imagery. please read my poem on Sun. thanks (Report) Reply

  • (5/3/2008 11:57:00 AM)


    Very nice poem! Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul's poems who is ten. I am sure you would enjoy it! (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/3/2008 7:50:00 AM)


    terrific descriptions of the sun.........keep going kesav (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 9:34:00 PM)


    sweet expressions. read my poem SUNSET. you will enjoy. (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 10:38:00 AM)


    Beautiful dusky poem, K.

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  • (4/16/2008 6:50:00 AM)


    amazing....
    a beautiful write.... lovely imagery..
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  • (4/15/2008 3:18:00 AM)


    a very amusing way of writing on sun rise/set! (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 3:44:00 AM)


    Absolutely beautiful. How well you articulated your thoughts on the sunset, it's glorious. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2008 4:01:00 AM)


    What a lovely time of day dusk is, so well depicted by you, I feel as though I am sitting watching it with you,10 for this,
    Best wishes Lynda x
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  • (4/11/2008 12:13:00 PM)


    Aha! Picturesque, with vivid imagery. And yes evocative as well! (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 7:18:00 AM)


    So the eye of heaven bid good bye and the grey curtains were drawn,
    Tomorrow again they would not be meeting but departing….
    A beautiful metaphor which made the ordinary so emotive and special…
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, February 2, 2009


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