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Original As Day

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day day day or history should I call you?
To you future is alien, only present is the ink that fills your pen
Your pen that has never licked the same letters upon the book of time.
On the pages of seconds you carve universes silent whisper
a silent whisper sage yearn to hear

Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original
as original as day
Friday, April 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
It just came to my mind that a day is original and no second in a day is the same as the last one so and you can Google it 'you won't come up with a result about this saying coz Its my brain child; -)
Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2019
A good start with a nice poem, Brian Jani. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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Fantone Mdala 12 May 2019
this good poetry. Please check out my poems
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Graham Thompson 07 February 2019
You have talent and your own unique voice - you should upload more poetry.
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T Rajan Evol 27 December 2016
A thought provoking poem.
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Ernest Makuakua 08 March 2016
Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original as original as day NICE WORK MY FRIEND KEEP WRITING
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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2015
Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Babatunde Aremu 27 October 2014
good thought and write! Keep the pen flowing
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Walterrean Salley 10 September 2014
Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original as original as day Exactly. As original as this write. Well done my friend. All best.
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Sina Farajzadeh 17 July 2014
Hi. I read your poem. Well, there's a famous saying Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery but today is a gift that is why it is called present. But I think today is also a history and even tomorrow will be a history for next generation. All in all I believe in carpe diem and live the moment my friend. Good Luck
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Roseann Shawiak 14 July 2014
Brian, each sentence is a complete thought that can stand on it's own, but put together to make this poem is truly amazing! ! I love it. Each sentence enlightens the entire poem. Thank you Brian, for all the wonderful comments you have written, I appreciated them more than you know. Thank you, RoseAnn
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