Original As Day Poem by Brian Jani

Original As Day

Rating: 3.8


day day day or history should I call you?
To you future is alien, only present is the ink that fills your pen
Your pen that has never licked the same letters upon the book of time.
On the pages of seconds you carve universes silent whisper
a silent whisper sage yearn to hear

Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original
as original as day

Friday, April 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It just came to my mind that a day is original and no second in a day is the same as the last one so and you can Google it 'you won't come up with a result about this saying coz Its my brain child; -)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 14 July 2014

Brian, each sentence is a complete thought that can stand on it's own, but put together to make this poem is truly amazing! ! I love it. Each sentence enlightens the entire poem. Thank you Brian, for all the wonderful comments you have written, I appreciated them more than you know. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Sina Farajzadeh 17 July 2014

Hi. I read your poem. Well, there's a famous saying Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery but today is a gift that is why it is called present. But I think today is also a history and even tomorrow will be a history for next generation. All in all I believe in carpe diem and live the moment my friend. Good Luck

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 May 2014

Yes, every day is original, and it comes after our thinking, however in this moment nobody knows what comes before the time. That is why we should figure out what to do after the challenge appears. That is why I say there is no good, nor bad, only life experiences, because we learn from everything. If someone do not know this, they might fall apart, worry and takes very long time to solve their problems.

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2018

I A g r e e. .

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Brian Jani. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Fantone Mdala 12 May 2019

this good poetry. Please check out my poems

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Graham Thompson 07 February 2019

You have talent and your own unique voice - you should upload more poetry.

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T Rajan Evol 27 December 2016

A thought provoking poem.

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Ernest Makuakua 08 March 2016

Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original as original as day NICE WORK MY FRIEND KEEP WRITING

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