louis rams

Gold Star - 6,444 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Osama Bin Laden - Poem by louis rams

OSAMA BIN LADEN
'free will' for people to choose
will be the reason that you lose.
it is easy to die, but harder to live.
so for you, their life they give.

is your mind and will power so weak
that it will sway.
and for Osama Bin Laden your life you will lay?

do you think that he would give up his life
for this fight?
not while you're in plain sight!

heros and martyrs fight for their rights
and the rights of others.
and when they go to heaven
they are sister and brothers.
they do it instinctively without purpose
or gain, for they are not looking
for fortune or fame.

there are no heros or martyrs
residing in hell.
the suicide bombers, i'm sure can not tell.

innocent lives they have taken
and left the families barren and forsaken.

you was'nt put in this world to commit suicide.
OBL told you a lie.
never being able to raise a family.
is this what your life was meant to be?

OBL- hear my words and hear them well
for what you are doing you will burn in hell.


Comments about Osama Bin Laden by louis rams

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/15/2010 6:14:00 PM)


    heros and martyrs fight for their rights
    and the rights of others.
    and when they go to heaven
    they are sister and brothers.
    they do it instinctively without purpose
    or gain, for they are not looking
    for fortune or fame............This is what they stand for and lay down their lives for the noble cause and fully subscribe to this views......10

    fread mine...martyrs.. bullet proof. you and me
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  • (2/6/2010 2:52:00 AM)


    Your first verse explains it all so well, while the rest is the icening on the cake. You know with all the brain washing thats going on. They think they will have it all. It's like seeing reality all in black and white, yet not with any grey tones but with a lot of levels. I must be getting tired, this paragraph almost makes sense. Nice to know I can always fall back on your work Louis, to get it straight. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2010 2:52:00 AM)


    Your first verse explains it all so well, while the rest is the icening on the cake. You know with all the brain washing thats going on. They think they will have it all. It's like seeing reality all in black and white, yet not with any grey tones but with a lot of levels. I must be getting tired, this paragraph almost makes sense. Nice to know I can always fall back on your work Louis, to get it straight. (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2010 9:09:00 PM)


    the bad people less than 10 percent seem mightier than the rest by the means they use...a good flowing poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2010 2:53:00 PM)


    Expressive write. Like the flow and feel of this one. (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2010 10:23:00 AM)


    The weapons of our warfare are not carnal, but mighty through God...

    Osama would get his for his alignment.. lets pray for him.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 26, 2010


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