Our Poetry Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Our Poetry

Rating: 5.0


If you wanna visit Eldorado,
Don't buy tickets! Just rhythm demo!
You can feel alive with yours
Through bullet trains of metaphors

Via the airship of similes
You can get reach praiseful balcony
With phrases trimmed by melody lace
Find out more who will crave!

Appreciating our ancestral zealots
Please never stop creating great jobs
Keep forwards with unshaken belief
Hope triumph for Poet laureate!

Like branches of Bonsai, we may be clipped
But try to escape through our nib
With great courage for faith marriage
Forever bow to poetry race!

One day, our soul will be shaken
By miraculous touch of magic pen
Piercing to multiple hearts
Blood of ecstasy to be emerged! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunny Rose 19 September 2012

like branches of bonsai we may be clipped...caught me really nice poem makes me wanna write poetry thnks

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Elena Sandu 18 September 2012

Beautiful written nice rhythm and rhyme, great metaphors! Wonderful poem, thank you for share! Inspired to me these thoughts: Can't stop to think that maybe we should never write with a laurel wreath, in the head, it may not get the magic pen. To be able to touch all kind of hearts we may need to have own heart pierced... People fear to relate through love but they would hardly step back back from empathy with others people's pain.

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Peter Maxharya 18 September 2012

Great work long live poetry long live our art

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 September 2012

Well, the poetry is great. the poem is lovely and great. enjoy reading your work. nice, our poetry...

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Jeanette Telusma 18 September 2012

Great work, ever word came together, keep writing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2012

Wow what metaphor! Enjoyd my ride thru yor read! A poet laureate in d making :)

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Ketan Hukare 06 October 2012

AMAZING! Mind blowing poem! You have a bright future!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

Keep forwards with unshaken belief Hope triumph for Poet laureate! Beautiful poem!

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Zero Ro 20 September 2012

Stunning poem! It's dedicated to providing our poetry with the best.

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Aung Si 20 September 2012

Good sister, good.I appreciate u.

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