Painfull Suffering Poem by Devils Favorite Child Blade

Bravo! A very powerful and well penned write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Keep it up! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City....

Good work and you write some neat poetry KEEP IT UP! ! ! :) :)

Strong emotion in this poem. I like it. Great job!

wow that was amazing so much said in so little bit of worods it was jus tamazing good job

I like the whole meaning and the element of the poem and the positive outlook line - i liked to read about might part - which is' fight with all your might', the only thing is that it felt a bit out of sync. you write nice the thought is real good too. keep writing.

I love this poem so much

ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS I LOVE IT AND THAT SUMS IT UP: D

thank you all for these kind words and the last line i had to censor it because the wont let me use duck change the D to Fand and i'd would have written 'duck this with all my might'.

This is a good poem, your emotions were portrayed well, nice job.

Strong and powerful..good use of words. -SG