Painter Poem by Asif Baloch
Painter
painting was painted
and hanged on the wall
people are entering
the exhibition is on
everyone is watching and
have an idea of there own
the true meaning of painting
is lost and gone
the painter standing in the corner
smiling on there thoughts
with sadness in his smile
and tears once that dropped
-
I'm thankful to my friend and fellow poet Ashraful Musaddeq for encouraging and helping me out in the completion of this poem....
I recomend this with an 8 because it has some good lines I like. But I also will take this opportunity to illustrate what I meant by too many words and lines not needed. ' People are entering and The exhibition is on ', and the fact that the PAINTER is ' standing in the corner.' None of these words or lines are relevant to the poem. GW62
nice picture u have painted asif--the canvas will be the admiration of many. +10 regards anjali
Painter speaks volumes of meanings though short. Thanks for your nice comment on my poem Grief. Best Wishes................
Though a very small poem it has great depths....great idea, very well rendered...10
It's arts, where meanings are based on the audiences. Subjectivity is unavoidable. Poor painter, if he wants the meaning to be rigid according to his own manifestation. But yes, at least the painting is appreciated.
Very touching. But at least the painting was appreciated. Excellent.A ten for your sensitivity. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
12/6/2025 1:56:32 PM # 1.0.0
A rare concept...again u have touched a theme thats trivia for many...and exelled with ur compassionate mind.