Paradoxical Alikes Poem by Sathya Narayana

Paradoxical Alikes

Rating: 4.6


Blazing red
Ascetic saffron
Appeal to me
In same tone

Radical cannons
Vedic canons
Sound to me
In same tune

Rishi Marx
Rebel Manu
Seem to me
Right addresses

Take my route
Learn the truth

(Manu was a great exponent of Vedas. He wrote Manu Smrithi
a codified Hindu law based on Vedic tenets)

BY sathya narayana
dt: 11-11-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 04 December 2008

Rishi Marx is linked with Rebel Manu from the reverse side. It should be Rebel Marx and Rishi Manu from the positive side, I feel.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 November 2008

very deep, yet perfect in simplicity great poem

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Ershad Mazumder 22 November 2008

Yes, I like this style very much.Very simple with deep message. I have read veadas, Upnishadas and Geeta.Thanks.

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Jyoti Saxena 22 November 2008

rishi marx- rebel manu- u very well expound the universal tolerence which is the essence of hinduism-we respect every one for what they are -an indian rebel or a foregn rishi -yr work are in sync with my thougt pattern--full 10

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Raja Basu 21 November 2008

Superb. A sound philosophical observation expressed in a light tone.

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Raja Basu 07 February 2009

Really entertaining.

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really good poem.i love it!

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Zoleka Lusiti 12 December 2008

Simple and rythm is and sounds bold! Well written, I like it and give 10+++

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

STriking differences well brought out here. U get 10++...........

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 December 2008

This is simply a wow... simple but so deep... More I read from you, more I love poetry...10 ++++

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Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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