Blazing red
Ascetic saffron
Appeal to me
In same tone
Radical cannons
Vedic canons
Sound to me
In same tune
Rishi Marx
Rebel Manu
Seem to me
Right addresses
Take my route
Learn the truth
(Manu was a great exponent of Vedas. He wrote Manu Smrithi
a codified Hindu law based on Vedic tenets)
BY sathya narayana
dt: 11-11-2008
Yes, I like this style very much.Very simple with deep message. I have read veadas, Upnishadas and Geeta.Thanks.
rishi marx- rebel manu- u very well expound the universal tolerence which is the essence of hinduism-we respect every one for what they are -an indian rebel or a foregn rishi -yr work are in sync with my thougt pattern--full 10
Superb. A sound philosophical observation expressed in a light tone.
Simple and rythm is and sounds bold! Well written, I like it and give 10+++
STriking differences well brought out here. U get 10++...........
This is simply a wow... simple but so deep... More I read from you, more I love poetry...10 ++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rishi Marx is linked with Rebel Manu from the reverse side. It should be Rebel Marx and Rishi Manu from the positive side, I feel.