Passing Love Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Passing Love

Rating: 4.3


There is nothing high,
Or that clean record,
For people to remember her,
But she has become immortal,
Because of this Man mortal.

She is an asset,
Sometimes first half of the word,
Who initially wants comfort,
And then leaves a man without an effort.

Let she remember what she was,
Before and after she met me.
Not to condemn her love or care,
But the design of dispatch,
Was very rare, absolutely not fair.

Alas! I never knew,
She traded my heart,
For her time to be passed.
True, her time passed,
True, even she passed.

Dedicated to the time passed.

Thala Abhimanyu Kumar

Dated: 23/11/2019

Passing Love
Saturday, November 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 23 November 2019

A well expressed blank verse....10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2019

A lovely work carrying an image of of a gentle poet! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 November 2019

A realistic expression about love and it's derivatives. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Harish s reddy 23 November 2019

Super sir

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Harish 23 November 2019

Super sir

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Tulsi Shrestha 30 November 2019

Congratulations, dear poet

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A past time of trading heart. Congratulations Abhimkanu Kumar

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Kingsley Egbukole 29 November 2019

" She traded my heart, For her time to be passed" Betrayal of love very nicely put.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2019

Passing time! ! ! Muse of her steps. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2019

A nice poem with a sad ending.Very nicely crafted and makes an interesting reading. The last stanza reveals how she passed her time using his heart. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.

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