Patience Is The Key Poem by asma bahrainwala

Patience Is The Key

Rating: 3.9


Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.

Though life is a confounded pickle,
It can be
Sorted out.

Though life is a spider’s web,
It can be
Straightened out.

Patience is the key
If you
Want to live.


8th September 2006
Asma…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 15 September 2006

Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma! Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 08 September 2006

great words of wisdom asma...great going...love...nalini

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Aldo Kraas 05 January 2007

Yes asma You got that right patience is the key

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Abdul Sattar 09 December 2006

Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem!

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Raghavan Warrier 24 November 2006

It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique.

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Shivapriya Surve 19 November 2006

'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie! I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!

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Peter A. Crowther 27 September 2006

Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write!

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