Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.
Though life is a confounded pickle,
It can be
Sorted out.
Though life is a spider’s web,
It can be
Straightened out.
Patience is the key
If you
Want to live.
8th September 2006
Asma…
Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem!
It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique.
'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie! I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!
Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma! Preets