Peace Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Peace

Rating: 4.5


Peace
Peace to release dove
Peace to lease love
Peace to piece heart
Peace to decrease smart
Peace to increase justice
Peace to cease injustice
Lack of conscience
Caprice
War

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nice and short I love peace this was a good poem..

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Seema Chowdhury 17 November 2008

simple and short but strong emotions and words. well done.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 November 2008

peace for all beautifull flowers's love to nightingle of shiraz! ! ! :) 10+++++

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Fiona Davidson 17 November 2008

Powerful use of words...love it...Fi

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Meggie Gultiano 17 November 2008

a nice write, indeed.Wonderful

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Nora Eason 24 November 2008

great job, keep up the good work.

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Brenda Tamayo 18 November 2008

We need more peace in the world.

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Peace would be really nice.A ten from me.

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Alison Cassidy 18 November 2008

A delightful play on words with a strong message. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Annie Girl 17 November 2008

nice :) its short but in the poem it said it all wonderful

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