Saturday, August 22, 2009

Peacock-Feather Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
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indira babbellapati
COMMENTS
Ranjit Ravindran 30 September 2009

Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 25 September 2009

after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery

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Saadat Tahir 02 September 2009

vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

lovely imagery...lovely vision

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 September 2009

Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.

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Ency Bearis 01 September 2009

brilliant imagery..very nice concept.....10

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Mubeen Sadhika 28 August 2009

Simple. Crisp. Fine images. deserve 10+

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Dr Kamran Haider 27 August 2009

Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :) A friend, Kamran

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Patrick A. Martin 26 August 2009

I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !

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Vaibhav Pandey 26 August 2009

so beautiful imagery.....very imaginative write..10

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/26/2009 1: 49: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a peacock-feather sea Now that's a colorful metaphor. Your mind is unfolding like feathers it seems as wrote this.

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Alison Cassidy 25 August 2009

Exceptional image. We share our garden with a pair of these exotic beauties and they never cease to stun me with their beauty. I can see your sea - magnificently! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandhya S N 25 August 2009

Your imagination is wonderful mam.. regards sandhya

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What a glorious vision you have had Indira and am grateful to share it with you. love Karin

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 24 August 2009

imagery.....imagery....imagery...........awesome. thank you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2009

excellent imagery created! fine wording! 10+

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Sandra Martyres 22 August 2009

Beautiful imagery Indira - an imaginative piece indeed...

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Rakesh Bedi 22 August 2009

Something beyond this world, indira; must be one of your best!

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Sandhya S N 22 August 2009

ohhh god! ! ! what an imagination.. brilliant regards sandhya

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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