scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
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after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery
vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten
Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.
Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :) A friend, Kamran
I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !
From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/26/2009 1: 49: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a peacock-feather sea Now that's a colorful metaphor. Your mind is unfolding like feathers it seems as wrote this.
Exceptional image. We share our garden with a pair of these exotic beauties and they never cease to stun me with their beauty. I can see your sea - magnificently! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
What a glorious vision you have had Indira and am grateful to share it with you. love Karin
imagery.....imagery....imagery...........awesome. thank you.
Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !