~ Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~

Rating: 5.0


Since there can be no cozy place
God devised womb in Mothers.

Since no first immunization can be synthesized
God created colostrums in Mothers.

Since no nutrient can be ever chemicalized
God sprung nectarine spring in Mother.

Since no freshener can be so allayer
God formulated corpusfreshener in Mothers.

Since no smile can be so captivating
God designed smiles in Mothers.

Since no toy gizmo ever give comfy
God crafted caresses in Mothers.

Since there is no better soother
God voxed berceuse in Mother.

Since no poet can portray attributes of human
God imaged unportrayable Mothers.

All hymn psalm
All leaves are paper
All sermons parables
All sages seers literati
Stumble bumble swag to
Portray greatness and
Brilliances of Mothers.

Holiest Whole
Wholesome Whole
You’re embodiment of.

Since God couldn’t be
Present everywhere
All Highest created Mothers.

I Ms. Nivedita
Try vainly
To portray You
Condone this self but.

Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~ O' Magnum Bonum
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[1] Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre [Spanish] ~ But I Salute You Mother.
[2] Magnum Bonum [Latin] ~ A Great Good.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 06 September 2010

What a wonderful tribute and salute to mothers! ! I salute you for writing such a delicate poem :) 10/10(I invite you to read my poem'My mother')

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Ken E Hall 21 August 2010

Wonder salutation to all mothers on the planet..giving birth, guarding their children with fire and brimston is a hallmark of your feelings for fellow man...woman the ultimate tenderness for child care....deep insight +++10/1o regards

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Dwi Utami 19 August 2010

the mothers was perfect humankind so big she made a sacrifice for the child and family, if in the world of the mothers did not have the content meaning that the world was not again humankind, mothers gave birth to us and taught us about the life of mothers to be picture of heaven. Im enjoyd read these poem. Nice 10/10

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Anita Trivedi 08 August 2010

Ya a great salute to Mother........ Words are always less for me when it comes to write something on Mother........ Great.............

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David Beckham 31 July 2010

Its totally humbling to read this. The richness in your thought and the vision to put it together to create such a grand tribute to mothers is very compelling. Maya Angelou will be proud of this. Thanks for sharing and showing the world that after Shakespeare and all, there still exist amongst us those that are capable of producing moments like this. A++++

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Ramesh Rai 10 July 2012

Pero Yo Te Saludo- Niv for such nice creation. Only God can imagine before creation that he shall have to take birth from the same womb. Sw.Vivekanand realised that womb from where all creatures are taking birth... Maa is a word which is common to all. Your endeavor is Magnum Bonum.10++++++++++++. Thanks for sharing. May God bless your talent be always gleaming.

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Matt Mooney 06 November 2010

Puts one into the frame of mind to ask oneself: 'Do we really fully understand how sacred a woman is who is the bearer of life, body and immortal soul, and God's great instrument of creation? '.10.

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2010

That is why Mother is the first known God to mankind! Your poems confirms this saying pretty clear!

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Bert Bell 10 October 2010

Hi Niv, I found this poem to be perfectly charming and poignant. I see it as a tribute to both God and motherhood. I love your word choices in this one, they are so fitting and they create such great visuals. You have a wonderful poetic mind.

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Dove Allen 22 September 2010

Ahhh...where would mankind be without the 'mother'! All children beneath their mother's heart are sacred! She is the 'instrument' through which humanity sings its eternal songs of life! She protects with her own essence...mind, body and soul! Accolades for such a beautiful testimony of how important the mother is!

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