Pervasive Grandeur Poem by Valsa George

An excellently composed verse richly deserving of appreciative comments by fellow poets. The Urdu poem posted by Shahzia Batool in her comments is equally appreciable

Valsa, This is the first poem I have added to my favourite list. Thank you for its beauty and simplicity.

Indeed its true perception its wending way unset, aesthetic leads us on and captures the poet.

It's our focus of perception that we can see the underlying beauty in simple things and equal in grandeur as being the part of divine programme, philosophy penned well in couplets.

a nice poem about creation with amazing rhymes.

Thus the low and the high in equal glory stay When their respective roles, they fairly play With the focus of perception turned to levels transcedental Everything would appear alluringly ornamental! ......so touching and true. yes, the low or high stay in equal glory as per their respective roles. A marvelous poem amazingly shared.10

Very truly said......Valsa.....I see beauty in everything be it weed or reed.....all in glory in their respective seat............ very nicely composed

An excellent poem giving a message that everything (small or big) in this earth is has it's respective role to beautify and to fulfill the requirement of this earth which they are doing silently. ... very nice

Valsa, so succintly you have portrayed the grandeur that is so pervasive from the low to the high which is great! On the same lines I too have attempted earlier (we are parallel thinkers, I suppose) but your poem is so very nice and compact and better than mine.- A Ten - for you!

wonderful poem equating every thing though we deny simple and deep and easy to grasp great write