Pickled Scenery Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

s.zaynab kamoonpuri

Port Hart corte (place of birth)

Pickled Scenery

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A labrador barks at a passing stranger
as the pond geese honk sensing some danger
Trudges back home a rangy lone ranger.

Dolphins perform in the aquatic circus
Kids count on the time-old abacus
All in all the miracle of creation's fabulous

Big and little aubergines cast a purple shade
In the twilight birdsong begins to fade
Night makes navy-blue of the greenery's jade.

Wolves howl in the distance
Panthers prowl near the pig pens
Ocelots growl about their dens.

Elsewhere the morn dawns upon wee ladybirds
And shepherds go about grazing their hungry herds.

A rare sight of starfishes settle upon beach pebbles
Pink salmon in a see-through lake breath out bubbles
Ah and no life should end up in debris or rubbles.

Wild species lurk in the murky forest
Stands tall and hovering high mount Everest
A chance to enjoy nature at its very best!

Admit it O' mankind no one can ever be
at par with your and my versatile Creator
The billions of species is far too extraordinary
He single-handedly created all that variety in nature.
For even the clever human who invented the radio
did not as well model the computer
The one who designed my dresser couldn't design my patio
It'd be rare for a shoemaker to also be a tutor

But God He made both ant and elephant
and there's absolutely nothing that He can't.

Pickled Scenery
Friday, October 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Very nice poem about nature and the role of God. It's unusual that most verses have 3 rhymes. Nicely done.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Thanx intellectual poet.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Thanx intellectual poet for only the true thinker acknowledges God.

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Unwritten Soul 13 July 2017

Thats true, great thoughts! Rhyming n choosen words with positive insight, make it a perfect way to believe i n Him, beautiful poem! ! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 06 February 2017

Fantastic poem! It's like a time-lapse scan over the earth, full of God's creations. Thank you for writing it. You might enjoy mine that carry a similar thought and both were written in Tanzania - A Leakey Theory and The Crater.

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Kim Barney 30 November 2016

Very nice poem, and so true. I love these lines: Admit it O' mankind no one can ever be at par with your and my versatile Creator We are not here by chance. We do have a creator and we will meet Him again after this life.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 December 2016

So true and sincere about The Creator. Thanx soo much for a comment that makes me smile deeply.

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Kee Thampi 18 November 2016

Dolphins perform in the aquatic circus Kids count on the time-old abacus All in all the miracle of creation's fabulous nature with a love write

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Christopher Tye 31 October 2016

Wonderful poem, creation has given us an extremely varied world of nature.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2016

Thanx soo much poet for yor comment. Now that is a scientifically accurate statement the way u put it. Cheers.

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