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naida supnet
bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
Sunday, October 31, 2010

Poem Fever

Rating: 4.9
I feel sick-the feeling one feels when he has a fever
The same anxiety, ill-mood, and very sober
I feel numb-as the fever triggers inch by inch
Making me worried, I need a pinch
I panic-afraid not to find the right words
Like a nice song played in the wrong chords
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
Even in my sleep you keep haunting.

So I closed my eyes, the words fall like rain
I pick each line that reaches my brain
Put each mood, emotion and feelings
And every little joy and pain my heart sings
Every verse flows from my heart to my pen
Like a river flowing until now since then
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
In my dream every night you keep coming.

Like a young girl's cheeks kissed by the wind
I am beaming
Like a bud in the morning kissed by the dew
I am skipping
Like a delicate skin kissed by the sun
I am smiling
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
Even when I'm at rest, you're insisting.

Like the flowers and bees who are inseparable
We can't separate
Like ice cream and cake you're irresistible
I can't resist
Like the sun and the moon who share the same sky
We share the high
Ah..Poem Fever you're here to stay
You visit me each day come what may.
naida supnet
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 28 September 2019
Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Naida.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2019
I simply love this poem, dear ate Naida....
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016
Words fall like rain! Nice work.
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A creative and captivating composition. Well done!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014
So I close my eyes and words fall like rain. Excellent imagination on poem and poet's thought. Very nicely scripted and honoured.
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Savita Tyagi 21 September 2014
Wonderful poem. The way poem writing stays in mind of poets is known but the way you expressed it is just amazing. Enjoyed it very much. full 10.
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 September 2014
The poet here makes the mental efforts of a poet in such clear vision and wonderful it is. A beautiful poem.
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Kim Barney 21 September 2014
Great poem. I feel the same way when the urge to write hits.
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I feel like this when the Muse grabs me for another round of co-operative inspiration...great spin on poetry..a ten
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 September 2014
The thing inseparable lovely poem and PH and its member know soul and body inseparable if separated decays
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