Monday, July 10, 2006

Poem Needs A Home

Rating: 5.0
Wayward in unjust life.
Tossed with all strife.
Here my noise on a page.
Maybe to come of age.
Another poem next to me.
Now Im not alone and free.
Many noise poems with me.
Here on the page to see.
What is that noise.
Another poem from the coys.
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009
Many noise poems with me. Here on the page to see. What is that noise. Another poem from the coys....very well said and done.. it needs recognition and well place home in page....10 read mine number one.. can i reach on top
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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009
The use of the word coys made me to think. Interesting piece.
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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009
Excellent poem Joe...enjoyed reading it....thank you
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Albert Wong 27 October 2008
A wonderful poem with a nice title +10.
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Jester's P 23 October 2008
...needs a home is already enough to convey a message of 'life'- the need not just to live in a house but to at home. nice
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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008
A nice poem with nice title. Lovely,10+
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008
i guess ur poem finally fpund a home...! ! ! nicely presented with subtle usage of words... :)
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Kathryn Tyler King 25 September 2008
I like this eye view or from a poem's view. Funny how we can take inanimate objects and even thoughts and make something from it. Clever.
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Ivor Hogg 19 September 2008
You have a unique style my friend full of rhymes and yet discordant at the same time. I have read several of your poems and will read more later I am an old fashioned formalist still attempting to come to grips wityh free form
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Marilyn Lott 19 September 2008
That is so true, Joseph! So much goes on within the poet/writer with so many thoughts that just daily life alone evokes. Keep writing and posting. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
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