Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Preying On... - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Looking down the lawn
Perching up a tree
The clever little bird
Finds a worm in glee

The dear little worm
Knowing not its doom
Scraping green the leaf
Never was in grief!

The poor little leaf
Numb ‘n dumb in pain
Cursing on its life
Looked sad and drained

Flying down the squeak
Catches worm on beak
A snake lying by
Swallows whole it dry

Out the keeper comes
Water pot, one hand
Straight to parent plant
Club on other hand!

15 04 08


Comments about Preying On... by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (5/24/2010 10:23:00 AM)


    Nature and human nature are sometimes like 1 complete vicious circle. Truly well written!
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  • (7/28/2009 2:20:00 AM)


    brilliant poem...water in one...club in the other...lovely narration of the incident...10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2009 9:35:00 AM)


    Stunning symbolic creation, a very nice poetic narration of the chain of life of preys and predators..........Awesome craft, as always my friend.....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2008 3:55:00 AM)


    there was an ordered peck
    of food chain select...
    ecological of lessons
    simple and direct....
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  • (5/18/2008 11:19:00 PM)


    Wheels within wheels, and so life goes on...
    Irony of life too!
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  • (4/27/2008 11:06:00 PM)


    word made a paddle...
    The dear little worm
    Knowing not its doom
    Scraping green the leaf
    Never was in grief!

    I love to kiss this poem
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  • (4/26/2008 12:44:00 AM)


    good one, natures canvas beautifully pictuarised...... survival a priority in life for all, (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 3:15:00 AM)


    question of survival haan! ....... nice naration..... (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2008 5:38:00 AM)


    excellent story telling... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 5, 2008


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