Prison Planet Poem by suzan gumush

Prison Planet

Rating: 4.0


Why all those wars!
Why all those dramas!
Why should life
Have to be a living problem!
Only we make them....
We created them!
The list goes on....and on....and on!
Planet Earth has become a living prison
We've encaged ourselves
Within a world full of Lies
Which is the right way
No one really knows
Because we forgot
How real living grows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 05 September 2008

All I can say is, I agree. My chorus at Webster University is singing a piece whose text contains a very similar message. It is very important today to constantly stand up for the fundamental truth that war is an unnecessary evil.

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Ency Bearis 04 September 2008

truistic verses...same inquisitive thought I have and I sympathize with you... Ency Bearis

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Pied Piper Berry 04 September 2008

This poem speak a truth on several levels. It is a good write, and another 10

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Adeline Foster 27 May 2016

Good write! Which is the right way, so many do ask and still ask. We were given a manual that few read, and many fear to read, it is in there should we but search. Good poem! Read mine - I Have Delighted - Adeline

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C H Sund 13 October 2008

Great ending, made the poem.

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Dr Kamran Haider 05 October 2008

I must say you have a visionary and unpolluted soul…

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 09 September 2008

wow, i love the last line

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Lee Crowell 06 September 2008

just getting familiar with your work and saw this is a recent one, nice job...I like it

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