I stood were I wasn't present
The where were I was present
Three sixty five attendance
Very tense in the dense.
I was to we
We and I to society
I am looking at myself
Walking away to find myself.
I lowered to a pitch
Thinking something to stitch
A pair He and She
Which the world may wish to see.
I write this poem in blue
With all my heart is true
I never expect a prize for this poem
As it remains my prize poem.
Know your style, stick to it, improve where necessary, enjoy and... keep on keeping on!
I'm hoping that your lovely prize poem will win for you the prize.
hate it when people go on about rhyming and why we shouldn't do it, some people like to rhyme others do not, it's not right to push your individual style on other aspiring poets. If it's good enough for dylan and emily d rhyming is good enough for me lol
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I have read three poems so far and all of wich i believe show that you need improvement in English grammer, if you were to improve i believe that you would be able to write much better. Also a word of advice. poetry does not have to have rhyming but it does when the words fit(They will give of a feeling to you, and you will know that no other word is better than the one you chose) , rhyming words in place of a better word kills the poem. As for the review of this poem. I do not feel as if you enjoyd writing this poem and as a result, i do not enjoy reading it much eithor. again i wait for your improvement. I believe that you have talent and that you can write much better poetry. Also i would enjoy it if you wrote a poem in a different style other than the 3 i have seen. Thank you.