Been successful in love
Is like two sides of a coin
Hearts afraid to crack
Live without its other half
Whiles love break hearts like dishes
Others will laugh.
Fools rush in pleasure like flies
Like babies we hear their cries.
True beauty isn't on a face
But locked in a heart
When tears wet the ground
Minds will open wide.
The wise are like open books
Ready to listen and learn
The wise become wiser
Whiles fools never learn
And become bigger fools
My heart walked through a dessert
But it didn't suffer from thirst
Only through life's storm
A soul can increase its faith
Life's monstrosities
Are crosses humans carry
Whiles they suffer, they become strong.
Struggles in life are building blocks
Building man for the future.
Money and power isn't sucess
But obstacles blinding man's eyes
Out of life's sweetest treasure
The most valuable gift
Is in the love of God.
June 04th 2009
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great job bro....expressed in your unique ways....keep penning
Very nice poem. I have issue with: Money and power isn't sucess But obstacles blinding man's eyes u may need to temper these two lines.
I Do So Very Much LOVE This Poem Of Yours... The First Two Lines Grabed Me And Held Me Through The Whole Poem. It Is True That One May Never Know If The Love The Are In Will Land On Heads Or Tails - Good Or Bad. Keep Up Your Wonderful Work. -Mercedes E. Wilkerson
Loved ur lines.......My heart walked through a dessert But it didn't suffer from thirst Only through life's storm A soul can increase it's faith Winnie
Out of life's sweetest treasure The most valuable gift Is in the love of God. money and power blind everybody... it is great write with good thoughts...10 read mine golden words...i am disgrace and come home
A lot of truth in what you say. I believe that true love has to include suffering. Not all suffering has to be evil. This line interests me in particular: When tears wet the ground Minds will open wide. Gives me something to ponder.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You and your love potions..! ! ! The love FOR God and IN humans definitely helps...... Amen. Cheers. Subroto