Radiant Heat Poem by Aqua Flower

Radiant Heat

Rating: 4.5


Radiant heat
makes warm feet
a toasty feeling for sure
I want to hug the floor

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,feeling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When my son was an baby he used to wake up and walk down the hall to mommy and daddy's bedroom.One cold night, we found him face down fast asleep on the floor of the hallway where he was on his way to our room. He was hugging the warm floor!:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 January 2019

Thanks for sharing such a fond, personal memory, dear poetess. Loved to read the 'Poet's Notes.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

After the fear went away from seeing him laying there lifeless on the floor and realizing he was only sleeping, it became a fond memory. You could imagine the first reaction. Thank you for your comment! :)

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Carl Roussell 11 January 2019

A fond memory for sure.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

Yes it was after we realilzed he was sleeping.... :)

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Sure 10/10 for this short poem.

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Oh great one and the poet's note made it further interesting.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

Thank you for the read and appreciating the story!

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