Rain Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
Rain
the sun and moon
the wind and rain
all this come to me
for a gain..and
it's my love..i refrain
even if i were in a drain
the sun will pick me up
with its scorch
the same scorch
which gives the moon
it's torch
the moon will float
that mild wind
that will unveil a silent bride...
the cloud
will pour out its love
by way of rain
nice words and phrases, deep meanings........sun and moon coming to one for gain and I refrain............ moon floating in a swift wind that unveils a bride and sun picking up one with the torch that gives moon its glow........good flow.....I am still pondering over the message it tries to give........U make me think
Good flow of words, really a very nice poem on rain.10.Read mine also let me feel the rain & kissing rain.
It is sad that, sun disappears, when it time for moon to come, Or moon disappears when sun arrives, When water comes near to fire, the fire disappeared.
' the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain....' Thats beautiful write here A raining beauty indeed. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
An easy and effotless flow that is as refreshing like rain.
the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain wow... the meaning of this hits the very soul of the reader. very much well done. :) im a fan.. officially.
even if i were in a drain the sun will pick me up .................... Nice message. Nice flow of your words..And I love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 1:43:27 AM # 1.0.0
nice poem, but i felt its so plain and general, it has nothing special to describe about rain, i thought the poem fully would be depicting a rainy day... as a general poem its fine....