Seven colors of rainbow
Looks like a embow
Embow without a vow
But hearts says wow
By seeing colorful bow
Bow forms after rain
Rain hear means pain
Pain means a gain
Gain should not vain
Vain in colors of fain
Fain is good
But not food
To cross wood
It spills blood
Like a flood
Floods if you rest
In its colorful nest
Its a killing pest
So live your best
To clear its test
Its test of control
So make a enrol
Like tank full petrol
Build a firing role
To make life console
Sort of a sing song play on words - Though the rainbow is GODS covenant with us that he will not flood the world again. [ good vibe ]
I do liek the rhymes and poem.. good going.
wonderfly writen! ! ! ! ! ! ! i tryed to write a poem like that where every line starts with the last word of the last line, there hard so good for you
Very inventive format, Kranthi.......................................
It is quite possible, Kranthi, that this is the one thousandth poem I have read about a rainbow. The number could be even higher, for I know I have read over 50,000 poems so far in my lifetime. This one, however, is one of the more unique of such poems. It is quite exressive and gets it point across very well. Carl.
Nice rhyme after rhyme from rainbow to make life console.
I felt it rhyme so much it took out the meanin of your poem...But good rhymin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
dear........... poem is good...............but add images........poem is not about rhyming alone......still i give 10+++.................for nice rhymes.....