Rainbow - Dancing With The Wind Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Rainbow - Dancing With The Wind

Rating: 3.7


Amazing lady you..
like you has never been..
like him has never seen..
and no one will know,

At night at the sea..
when there you will be..
in the wind you and who,

you will dance with the wind
when the start never end
with the waves both flow,

dropp me back to the rain
keep with you the Love's chain
then back me to the bow,

the amazing one are you...

water me and the buds.
teach the buds how to grow,

Your words like the touch,
your touch like the dew,

Keep on singing every day
toward you open the way
then the feeling let it glow,

keep on raising rate of beats
then the raising keep slow..

BROKEN HEARTS I TREAT..

n your breathing let me live
let me come, let me go..
let the sadness..me to blow,

how the chance became dance..
how the arts of the parts
let me see and you show..
God CREATION God draw,

words from the heart
from the feeling i will sew..
....................................
The wondrous one are you.......



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R. Ariffin 18 October 2009

Good writing. The rhyme is consistant and brilliant.

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Obinna Eruchie 13 October 2009

Rhythmic passionate lines that go 'At night at the sea.. / when there you will be.. / in the wind you and who, / you will dance with the wind / when the start never end / with the waves both flow, / dropp me back to the rain / keep with you the Love's chain / then back me to the bow...'

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Holly Smith 02 October 2009

love the rhythm of this poem xx

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Queen Dream 25 September 2009

Your mind is full of inspiration! ! I think you should have been born at Romeo and Juliets' decade. 10/10

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Anand Madhukar 18 September 2009

A very good read, liked it.

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Debra Cranford 29 January 2015

Beautiful.

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Sahar Sahar 27 November 2009

It is very beautiful poem to remember always with greatness in its structure

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Your words like the touch, your touch like the dew' Rachel Ann Butler

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Peter Langsford 20 October 2009

These poems are really making it into a top list somewhere?

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Eyan Desir 19 October 2009

Good flow of words I felt as if my tongue was dancing good write 10 points

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