TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Rainbow - Dancing With The Wind

Amazing lady you..
like you has never been..
like him has never seen..
and no one will know,

At night at the sea..
when there you will be..
in the wind you and who,

you will dance with the wind
when the start never end
with the waves both flow,

dropp me back to the rain
keep with you the Love's chain
then back me to the bow,

the amazing one are you...

water me and the buds.
teach the buds how to grow,

Your words like the touch,
your touch like the dew,

Keep on singing every day
toward you open the way
then the feeling let it glow,

keep on raising rate of beats
then the raising keep slow..

BROKEN HEARTS I TREAT..

n your breathing let me live
let me come, let me go..
let the sadness..me to blow,

how the chance became dance..
how the arts of the parts
let me see and you show..
God CREATION God draw,

words from the heart
from the feeling i will sew..
....................................
The wondrous one are you.......



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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 2, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2011

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Comments about Rainbow - Dancing With The Wind by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

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  • Debra CranfordDebra Cranford (1/29/2015 4:27:00 PM)

    Beautiful.

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  • Sahar Sahar (11/27/2009 7:07:00 AM)

    It is very beautiful poem to remember always with greatness in its structure

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  • Rachel Butler (11/8/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    'Your words like the touch,
    your touch like the dew'

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Peter Langsford (10/20/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    These poems are really making it into a top list somewhere?

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  • Eyan Desir (10/19/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    Good flow of words
    I felt as if my tongue was dancing
    good write 10 points

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  • R. Ariffin (10/18/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    Good writing. The rhyme is consistant and brilliant.

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/13/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    Rhythmic passionate lines that go 'At night at the sea.. / when there you will be.. / in the wind you and who, / you will dance with the wind / when the start never end / with the waves both flow, / dropp me back to the rain / keep with you the Love's chain / then back me to the bow...'

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  • Holly Smith (10/2/2009 4:02:00 PM)

    love the rhythm of this poem xx

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  • Queen Dream (9/25/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    Your mind is full of inspiration! !
    I think you should have been born at Romeo and Juliets' decade.
    10/10

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  • Anand Madhukar (9/18/2009 2:31:00 PM)

    A very good read, liked it.

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  • Mary Sanchez (9/3/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    What an interesting expression of feelings, I like the way you correlate the subjects of this piece.

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    The Dreamer (6/24/2009 11: 40: 00 AM)

    broken hearts i treat. I like these words always better to treat than create - Thank you

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:51:00 AM)

    ~ Jon London ~ (7/26/2009 9: 49: 00 AM)

    Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:51:00 AM)

    Saadat Tahir (7/16/2009 1: 39: 00 PM)

    Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds,
    Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads.


    writing credit...where due!
    The Aeneid,
    by Virgil

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    Afzal Shauq (7/12/2009 4: 14: 00 AM)

    I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/1

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    LAGO LAGO (7/6/2009 9: 38: 00 PM)

    let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    Rakesh Bedi (7/2/2009 12: 58: 00 AM)

    ..... broken hearts I treat; nice! Both the activities belong to love n only love!

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    Kristina B; Williams (7/1/2009 1: 13: 00 PM)

    NOT A TERM YOU WANT TO HEAR AS A POET, ACTUALLY I DO, BUT IM WEIRD, LOL, BIT THOSE 3 LINES WERE LIKE 60 LINES, SO SHORT WITH SO MUCH MEANING..AWESOME..NYWAYS GAY YOU N IT A 10..HAVE YOU READ ANY OF MY NEWEST 1S...THERE ARE 4...HURTS LIKE HELL, IS THE LAST OF EM, AND 3 B4 THAT 1..PLEASE READN VOTE, AND RESPOND TO EM

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/22/2009 1:48:00 AM)

    Shashendra Amalshan (6/28/2009 5: 49: 00 AM)

    hello ma'am..

    your words are great nourishment for the, sore, wounded, shattered hearts indeed..
    thanks for providing us with such pieces..10++

    with lots of love shan

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