Hazy and misty sky turns (into) bright
Sun shines faintly in the rain ere long
Lovely girl’s lovely eyes
Twinkle with amazement
Beholding the colorful rainbow in the sky
The swaying boughs and woods get in the way
Of the view of the pretty bow in the sky
Wishes the lovely sevenfold be watched
Amply out in near vicinity
Wishes the rain be suspended soon, she prays
Slumbers the rain as sudden
As her prayers are answered by her Lord
By leaps and bounds the little girl nips out
Of her confines joyfully to see her rainbow
But, Stands she still! Looking up the sky
And numb with shock! Give herself
Up to a feeling of utter despair
And she realizes unto
Her pretty rainbow is no more there and
It faded away with the rain.
May 28-2009 - Hawiyah - Saudi Arabia
Really wonderful expressions from an outstanding poet :)
..loved to chase the rainbow with the lovely girl with lovely eyes...nicely written..Brishti Mazumdar
wow that was good. I really liked that. I wish I could write like that.
From: Judy Meibach To: Nooruddeen MM Date-Time: 6/2/2010 3: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Rainbow Expressions ---------- This was a well written piece that had a great imagery to it - I could visualize the image that you were trying to convey and felt that it exuded a lot of emotion as well.
Colorful like rainbow…appearance is brilliant…nice imagery Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
hey this is a beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! well i wish some one will answer to some of my prayers.. this is a refreshing, nice sort of a sweet write indeed! ! ! ., ... thanks for this one.. 10 with love shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully expressed with the little girl longing to see a rainbow. However, she learned a rainbow can be elusive and all dreams don't come true. It reminds me of when a child bursts a balloon and they become momentarily unhappy. 10 Karin Anderson