Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Rookie - 15 Points (Jan 8-1952 / Perinnanam)

Rainbow Expressions - Poem by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Hazy and misty sky turns (into) bright
Sun shines faintly in the rain ere long
Lovely girl’s lovely eyes
Twinkle with amazement
Beholding the colorful rainbow in the sky
The swaying boughs and woods get in the way
Of the view of the pretty bow in the sky
Wishes the lovely sevenfold be watched
Amply out in near vicinity
Wishes the rain be suspended soon, she prays

Slumbers the rain as sudden
As her prayers are answered by her Lord
By leaps and bounds the little girl nips out
Of her confines joyfully to see her rainbow
But, Stands she still! Looking up the sky
And numb with shock! Give herself
Up to a feeling of utter despair
And she realizes unto
Her pretty rainbow is no more there and
It faded away with the rain.

May 28-2009 - Hawiyah - Saudi Arabia


Comments about Rainbow Expressions by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

  • (6/7/2010 8:13:00 PM)

    wow that was good. I really liked that. I wish I could write like that. (Report)Reply

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  • Nooruddeen Mm (6/2/2010 9:08:00 PM)

    From: Judy Meibach
    To: Nooruddeen MM
    Date-Time: 6/2/2010 3: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Rainbow Expressions
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    This was a well written piece that had a great imagery to it - I could visualize the image that you were trying to convey and felt that it exuded a lot of emotion as well.
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  • (5/26/2010 9:02:00 PM)

    Ohhh, wow. really good(:
    i love the rain
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  • (4/11/2010 1:07:00 AM)

    Colorful like rainbow…appearance is brilliant…nice imagery
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (7/5/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    hey this is a beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! well i wish some one will answer to some of my prayers.. this is a refreshing, nice sort of a sweet write indeed! ! ! ., ... thanks for this one..
    10
    with love
    shan
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  • Nooruddeen Mm (7/2/2009 1:42:00 AM)

    From: Johanna Butler (invercargill New Zealand; Female; 12)
    To: Nooruddeen MM
    Date Time: 6/25/2009 12: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: Hi
    hi it is awsome i would read it any time the for telling me about it can i show people at school i am in 7 and i am 12
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/22/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    And she realizes unto
    Her pretty rainbow is no more there and
    It faded away with the rain..... brief appearence as love..... fading away with rain... what an imagination from wonderful mind... good thought
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  • Indira Renganathan (6/22/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    Appear and disappear a rainbow from your spectrum of colourful words....nice (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (6/13/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    very nice poem...forks out into myriad possibilities....full of imaginative paths

    well written
    cheers
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  • Prasetya Utama (6/11/2009 3:07:00 AM)

    A colourfull love poem, very nice. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/4/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    ..loved to chase the rainbow with the lovely girl with lovely eyes...nicely written..Brishti Mazumdar (Report)Reply

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  • Ency Bearis (6/4/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    a wonderful imagery write....nice to read.....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    that was an excellent peom...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    Really wonderful expressions from an outstanding poet :) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/30/2009 2:45:00 AM)

    Beautifully expressed with the little girl longing to see a rainbow. However, she learned a rainbow can be elusive and all dreams don't come true. It reminds me of when a child bursts a balloon and they become momentarily unhappy. 10 Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • (5/29/2009 2:55:00 PM)

    Tanx for the comment. I read thru yours n its truly amazing, very catchy and meaningful. I did also compare and your rite it is very different frm the two poems. keep up the good work aswell.

    Jessica :)
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  • (5/28/2009 11:20:00 PM)

    Good Write
    mister.........
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/28/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    Beauty and sadness well blended with everlasting imagery.
    Regards
    Naseer
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  • (5/28/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    I stepped into the shoes of this lovely girl and waited with her in anticipation. Your gift for luxurious imagery is intoxicating and addictive.
    Peace.
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  • C. P. Sharma (5/28/2009 8:50:00 PM)

    Dear Nooruddeen,
    Thank you for sharing this beautiful heart pouring with enthralling imagery of the sun, shade and the rainbow. Life is also sevenfold like the rainbow ever unfolding its new hue but uniquely merged in the truthful whiteness of love for Nature.
    CP
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 28, 2009


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