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Rainbow Expressions

Rating: 5.0

Hazy and misty sky turns (into) bright
Sun shines faintly in the rain ere long
Lovely girl’s lovely eyes
Twinkle with amazement
Beholding the colorful rainbow in the sky
The swaying boughs and woods get in the way
Of the view of the pretty bow in the sky
Wishes the lovely sevenfold be watched
Amply out in near vicinity
Wishes the rain be suspended soon, she prays

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Nooruddeen Mm 02 July 2009

From: Johanna Butler (invercargill New Zealand; Female; 12) To: Nooruddeen MM Date Time: 6/25/2009 12: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Hi hi it is awsome i would read it any time the for telling me about it can i show people at school i am in 7 and i am 12

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And she realizes unto Her pretty rainbow is no more there and It faded away with the rain..... brief appearence as love..... fading away with rain... what an imagination from wonderful mind... good thought

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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2009

Appear and disappear a rainbow from your spectrum of colourful words....nice

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

very nice poem...forks out into myriad possibilities....full of imaginative paths well written cheers

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Prasetya Utama 11 June 2009

A colourfull love poem, very nice.

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Caitlyn Harris 07 June 2010

wow that was good. I really liked that. I wish I could write like that.

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Nooruddeen Mm 02 June 2010

From: Judy Meibach To: Nooruddeen MM Date-Time: 6/2/2010 3: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Rainbow Expressions ---------- This was a well written piece that had a great imagery to it - I could visualize the image that you were trying to convey and felt that it exuded a lot of emotion as well.

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Emily Espinoza 26 May 2010

Ohhh, wow. really good(: i love the rain

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Colorful like rainbow…appearance is brilliant…nice imagery Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 July 2009

hey this is a beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! well i wish some one will answer to some of my prayers.. this is a refreshing, nice sort of a sweet write indeed! ! ! ., ... thanks for this one.. 10 with love shan

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