Random Thoughts Xx Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thoughts Xx

Rating: 5.0


Big dreams and high ego
Signature color of youth
Blood red
Lost dreams and worn out ego
Signature of old
In faded water marks!

Want to do but can't do
Can do but don't want to
Summer days floating by

Tuesday, June 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2015

Lost dreams. Nice work.

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Narendra Jaggi 30 June 2015

Well, all of us were young once, and were perhaps susceptible to the same frailties, perhaps still are! Be well! ~Naren

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2015

What we do is something that is not supposed to be done. Negatives everywhere. They may not be random.

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Mark Heathcote 04 July 2015

I enjoyed this short poem & kind of apt at this of time.

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Valsa George 30 June 2015

What a terrible paradox! When energy is there, ego prevents from doing things! When ego diminishes, no more energy left to do and summer days float by! Great write, Savita!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 June 2015

A nice poem.........................

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Narendra Jaggi 30 June 2015

lol, all of us were young once, and had similar frailties, perhaps still do, teehee. Be well! ~ Naren

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