Random Thoughts-64 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thoughts-64

Rating: 5.0

Fall evening turns in to night.
As the darkness descends
It stares at me through blinds.
I leave the blinds open to touch it back.

Voices of solitude-Crickets!
The silence communicates,
Some vague thoughts- worthless
In their birth and demise!

A little later I close the blinds
Their soft cream color is soothing.

If here, you would be watching MSNBC!
The house would feel alive!
Miss you every day!
But my heart tells me you are happy up there.
In the long cycle of time
We were destined to have few moments together!

Your presence is still all around the house,
Touching me on countless moments.
Fall evening turns into night.

Savita Tyagi
October 2023

Tuesday, December 12, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Life,Memories
Bri Edwards 13 December 2023

'Some vague thoughts- worthless In their birth and demise! ' Maybe not 'WORTHLESS' to all! ' to all! !

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2023

Savita, I believe my 1st comment was taken by PH prematurely, as I believe your husband's physical presence was taken from you, BUT not your memories of him. Enjoy your memories. I give 5 ***** stars. : ) bri

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When loneliness strikes, " darkness ….stares at me through blinds"… great.. we miss our loved ones, whom we have lost in the passage of time..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 January 2024

A great remembrance of a loved one. Deeply touching and poignant.

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Savita Tyagi 17 December 2023

Thank you so much all of you for your love and support.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2023

You have aptly encapsulated mathematics of life here what you call random thoughts....appreciated!

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Bharati Nayak 14 December 2023

Life is really a journey.We meet countless people and things on our path.We take memories with us in this journey.A lovely poem of reminiscences.

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