Poems MUST be subtle!
Else them I’LL SCUTTLE! !
NEVER make the meaning clear!
From clear meaning YOU MUST ALWAYS STEER! !
ENOUGH! of poems about Loves.
REMOVE those boxing gloves! !
Give us GRIEF, and HATE, and GORE!
“Endearing” poems must exist NO MORE! ! !
And DAMN! your poets’ tricks!
I’ll HIT you HARD with STICKS …..
if spelling or punctuation FAILS,
and empty on you......PIG SLOP PAILS! ! ! !
(September 18,2013)
It`s great Bri that you are open in your writes to tell the truths many...
well bri, i first voted and then write this comment. nice one pal.
I love it (poem/rant) ! ! ! The poet who wrote it I still have to think about. I am truly honored to have inspired such a fine piece! ! ! And remember, Bri, when you're loved and adored by thousands what's one less or one more. [3
Well Bri you are a gas man that was quite a rant. I always find a good rant does you a power of good . Well done on rant and poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice one. I like yuor style of writing. Keep writing