Reality Poem by Djean Whitney


Rating: 3.7

You fall a sleep,
you see darkness,
you dream,
your dreaming of
a family.
your family.

Your family is brakig apart.
you've lost your job,
you cant put food on the table.

You panic, you frees,
your family tels you to look for a job.
you're in a dazes,
you cant see clearly its fussy,

You suddenly awake,
you can see the light.
it's not a dream, its real life,

You skater you wary,
but, you get your self under cintrol,
you hunt for a job, you succeed.

You now can suport your family
its all coming together
things are now fiting in to place,

Your now perminet at your now job,
you don't have any weres except,
you suddenly sit up in bed,
now was it a dream or reality

Bernard F. Asuncion 13 January 2017

Reminds me of the song REALITY popularized by RICHARD SANDERSON+++++++++ congrats, Djean, on being chosen for the day+++++++++++++

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 January 2017

Ups and downs in life, aren't strangers. Dreams too can be equally tossing or soothing minds. All of them are realities one can not run away from. Quite sensational thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Christina Simmons 13 January 2017

Well versed. Gives the reader the heartaches and headaches it can bring when you're unemployed with a family relying on you to put food on the table. Well done!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 January 2017

To sleep and dream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 January 2017

The different situations of human life in the poem interesting.

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Ravi A 13 January 2017

Dear poet, I have only this much to say. Please take care of spelling mistakes and faulty constructions. Read enough poetry. brakng, you frees, cintrol, fiting, perminet - etc. These days you get software for spell checks and kindly install one. Grammar is something we can learn lifelong. Wish you all best of luck.

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2017

Congrats for the honours of the POSTS. A nice poem.

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val Rogers 13 January 2017

I think this poem clarifies how creative you are. I enjoyed it. I enjoy trying to analyze my own dreams. So bravo to you, and Good luck.

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Clarence Prince 13 January 2017

Sometimes it's nice that a dream was just a dream and not real; other times we really wish that it was real!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 January 2017

Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day as also for inking such a realistic poem.

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