Red River (Him Version) Poem by Aqua Flower

Red River (Him Version)

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Floating down the red river
the quest for love
propels him to swim further
but he'll always stay in polluted waters
as long as he's with her

Copyright @ Aqua flower
Lion & Tigress series

Thursday, November 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: deception,lies,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

'but he'll always stay in polluted waters as long as he's with her' - hmm!

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Aqua Flower 24 November 2020

Thank you Khairul for reading my poem....hmmmm! Yes indeed

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 November 2020

Lovely. Tell him the river though red is safer than the many polluted rivers. Just as the red sea is pure

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Kostas Lagos 19 November 2020

This is really good! Love can be poisonous

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Varsha M 19 November 2020

This is beautiful as him version. Though he might be polluted even lotus too bloom in mud. Waiting for she version.

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