Refraction Poem by Valsa George

Refraction

Rating: 5.0


In the prism of my mind
Joy refracts into a billion photons of colours
Making a rainbow in my sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 02 December 2012

Making a rainbow in my sky. Good. I love it. I invite you to read my poems and comment,

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

i love this.. short and sweet!

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

brilliant.. deserves a 10+++

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Stevie Taite 03 December 2012

This poem shows feeling of great enjoyment of life! As a scientist I would maybe have preferred photons or waves instead of atoms but it doesn't really distract from the emotion put across! : -)

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Chandra Thiagarajan 04 December 2012

Joy makes a rainbow in the sky from the prism of your mind is a fantastic thought which enthuses joy in my mind.A classic cute poem.!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2019

Making a rainbow in my sky.....what an imaginative poem is! Wonderful presentation.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 January 2015

Great imagery with amazing words.......Valsa......specially with this line as Making a rainbow in my sky, I am lost......great composition....10

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Vishal Sharma 07 December 2012

nice ply of words...hats off

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Kee Thampi 05 December 2012

a palpable and lovable one for us.........

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Valerie Dohren 05 December 2012

Beautiful Valsa, very imaginative.

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