The cycle of events,
Ones which I cannot vent;
Have haunted my thoughts
Like a noose of ascots.
Undaunted I try to Escape
And to whip into shape
The life that has transpired
And the plans that backfired
Nonetheless I will push forth
As fast as the slowest sloth,
Also, try to overcome-
And become wholesome..
Uphill task this is I know,
But to this world I should show,
The past that haunts me-
Might be snuffed with reverie.
but, daydreaming isnt enough
We have to live through stuff.
Wishful thinking gets me nowhere,
Except making life threadbare...
Wake up, get up, be strong..! !
Expell whatever that is wrong,
Sing that long overdue song-
Of victory and virtue before long.
See the life change before you,
And if what I hope is true,
The past will not matter at all,
And at the center you'll stand tall.
Very inspiring poem. Life is not about sleeping and keep staring as times slips by. Like is about dreaming and working to fulfill the dreams. Enjoyed the lines thoroughly. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.
Some fine thoughts and rhymes. Good work and continue to compress and cut unnecessary words.
Nonetheless I will push forth As fast as the slowest sloth, Also, try to overcome- And become wholesome.... this is determination........ the one who lives and determines and works hard will attain. thank u for this poem of determination.. tony
It is a beautiful poem on life having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Well thought out and nicely written with conviction. A beautiful creation embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Vishorag and do remain enriched.
Truly profound! Inspirational! And motivational! Vishorag, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Incredibly uplifting and wonderful to read. It makes ones forget the Regret.
Thank you for the inspiring poem. To some one in this world, this can become the life safer even. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
Yes, as you have rightly pointed out, it is the present that can make a good future and so it is important that we wake up and expel whatever is wrong.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent stanzas - but, daydreaming isnt enough We have to live through stuff. Wishful thinking gets me nowhere, Except making life threadbare... Wake up, get up, be strong..! ! Expell whatever that is wrong, Sing that long overdue song- Of victory and virtue before long. nicely penned