Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 52,162 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

Relentless November Rain! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Waiting for friend's response I browse on
The Computer late night after the current
Has come as rain is heavily lashing out...!

Staying in one top flat it's difficult to go out
Anywhere due to rain water clogging as a
Great flood on all the main roads of metro!

Such a heavy rain comes only once in a
Blue moon and happens now in the city
Making all have a trying time in winter!

Sophistication of civilization has got nothing
To do with Nature's way of movement ever,
It seems, seeing the heavy down pour of rain!

Cyclone prone weather when becomes slow
Rain falls in profusion relentlessly in November!

Topic(s) of this poem: rain


Comments about Relentless November Rain! by Ramesh T A

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/11/2016 9:01:00 PM)


    Ramesh ji,
    Congratulations!
    A lovely poem!
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  • Ramesh T A (11/11/2016 1:23:00 PM)

    Thanks
    For all the nice comments, I convey my hearty thanks to all my dear poet friends! (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2016 10:14:00 AM)


    Heartiest Congratulations on the member poem of the day for this beautifully conceived equally beautiful poem depicting a different mood of the nature. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (11/11/2016 9:00:00 AM)

    Relentless November Rain
    Relentless rain can certainly be exasperating. Congratulations for having this poem chosen as member poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Dipankar Sadhukhan (11/11/2016 8:24:00 AM)


    Congratulations for being of the day....10 (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (11/11/2016 7:24:00 AM)


    Yes, winter is always a trying time for many of us,
    if not all of us! That's when we can expect rain and snow!
    Thanks for sharing, Ramesh T A
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  • Indira Renganathan (11/11/2016 6:35:00 AM)


    Sophistication of civilization has got nothing
    To do with Nature's way of movement ever,
    It seems, seeing the heavy down pour of rain! ...very 'true to reality' words....I do agree that living in top floor with power failure and rains is of great difficulty.... a good seasonal poem- 10++++
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/11/2016 4:23:00 AM)

    Congrats for the POTD
    A rain of emotions with the natural rain makes this poem a truly amusing, Nicely written... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/11/2016 1:29:00 AM)

    Rain water
    Clogging! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (11/11/2016 1:27:00 AM)


    Sophistication of civilization has got nothing
    To do with Nature's way of movement ever,
    It seems, seeing the heavy down pour of rain!

    Congrats for being selected for the day......
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  • Bharati Nayak (11/11/2016 12:21:00 AM)


    Relentless rain in November, Clogging of Metro city, waiting for current so that we can switch on our computer and browse through our popular sites with expectations for friends'messages- The real life experiences come alive in this poem.A wonderful write, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/15/2015 7:50:00 PM)


    There was confusion regarding danger of cyclone in South India. November rain left many signals here with imagery. Wonderful poem shared definitely that provokes thought....10 (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/15/2015 6:55:00 PM)


    rain and November- let us enjoy with new taste for ever.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, November 11, 2016


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