*religious Fission... Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

*religious Fission...

Rating: 3.7


Earth evolved, with it the seeds of mankind.
Uncivilised, uncouth yet with fair mind.
Knew they not, the art of differentiation.
A proclivity to progress; their perennial profession.
But with time, their mind needed a healer,
To detoxify their core from the worldly pleasure.

So few came up with a set of spiritual offers,
To build a new world of eclesiastic orders.
Some found peace and others a reason,
To segregate themselves from the bond of unison.
In the name of god, they started a religious fission,
And the essence of oneness vanished with seasons....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 30 April 2009

and with with fission came a lot of hate with passion to trade and barter our souls to the devil come lets forget this fission and live as brothers and sisters in love then this early mission will surely become a true vision as the Lord God above had truly intended wonderful write vaibhav -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 April 2009

great thoughts evolve here.. you shared with us a great piece.. very wholesome... touches one's inner thoughts... ...thought's provoking write.. 10++++

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Meggie Gultiano 28 April 2009

thought provoking...but anice job you have here, son Hugs, Mom

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Akram Saqib 27 April 2009

GREAT COINCIDENCE COINED BETWEEN ATOMIC AND RELIGIOUS FISSION

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Chitra - 24 April 2009

a fusion of powerful profound thoughts..churned out from your sensitive mind thought provoking!

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 25 January 2010

Indeed fellow Earthling- your profundity is Humanly well expressed I totally agree with the related contemporary WMD 'Fission' of; War, religion and political controversies You write; 'In the name of god, they started a religious fission, And the essence of oneness vanished with seasons.... ' god is not he god is not she God is We - Buddhism Thank you for your Wisdom sharing. ...louie

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Aditi Singh 01 July 2009

nice effort...well woven...quite impressive...

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

you ve used very effective words indeed which can speak to the core of the reader's mind....thanks for the words of wisdom10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 May 2009

In atomic explosion fission and fusion both are chain process, one related to the other. So is the religious fission and fusion. But your poem is true in spirit and sense......10/10

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Raj Nandy 05 May 2009

I liked the title of this poem, it is very apt! More blood has been lost in this world due to religious fission - than all the World Wars put together! When core of the atom is split lot of evil and negative energy is released! We require' fusion'! Like in music we have excellent jazz fusion! GOD IS ONE, - let us all blend together for the cause of Humanity! I have written on these aspects already! Thanks! 10! -Raj Nandy

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