I watched her from a distance
With at most interest
It wasn't her aesthetics
That attracted my sight
She was gazing the clouds atop
More than could average eyes
It was a glorious sunset!
She resonated with my mind
24th Jan 2020
The beauty in nature oft resonates with the mind especially the sight of this a short poem but beautifully rendered. amazing piece, dear Kesav Sir!
'She was gazing the clouds atop'...yes, the setting sun that is gazing the clouds atop...sunrise and sunset are eternal bewitching scenarios of nature that we poets can't resist..10
Sunshine love! ! ! She attracted your eyes. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I agree with poet Rose Marie: attraction happens in many a strange way. Beauty, surface deep, draws attention, what appeals the heart within is quite apart. well said
Appealing to heart. Yes. Mind is the master sense organ that rules supreme. Thank You Pathak. Nice observation on my poem. Liked
Attraction comes in many ways. It can be drawn from likeness of things we most appreciate in life. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.
Yes. Minds of the same wavelength. Thank you very much for your nice comment Rose Marie. Liked
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An artistic image! Well written!
Nice feedback Kostas. Liked a lot