Revati{english Translation Of Odia Poem Revati} Poem by Bharati Nayak

Revati{english Translation Of Odia Poem Revati}

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Revati

'Reva- - -, Oh Reva- - -
You cursed girl, you burnt ashes, you cursed fire'
(As you ate your parents)
Grand Maa calling

Those angry words of Grandma'
Still rings in my ear

Oh, How many years have passed
Revati had been turned to smoke
My text book of class seven
Had been lost in time
But Revati still lives in me

Why all school going girls
Look like Revatis?
These Revatis carry
the blame of all misfortune
That befall a house.

If a neo Romeo
Passes a stray comment
these poor Revatis
Lose their school bags
The sky falls on their head
If the soft image
Of Basu Sir,
enters, innocent, in their heart

Long back,
Cholera had
Taken away Revati
But on the roads
There are many vagabonds
Fake Basu Sirs roam
With acid bottles in their hands
Searching for Revatis.

Monday, September 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: education,girl
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Revati was an innocent villagegirl whose desire to study was much despised by grand mother because she believedgirl's education was responsible for all misfortunes befalling their family and village
Revati is the central character of the short story named '
Revati'penned by noted Odia writer Fakir Mohan Senapati(1843-1918)
Revati is considered first short story in Odia language)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2016

Girl Education! With the same problem seen in most parts of the world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2016

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your valuable words.Yes, innocent girls are mostly sufferer in predominantly male chauvinistic societies and it is found in many parts of the world

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 02 November 2016

Its good that many improvements has been done in the education of women outside the cities of India. The story goes that all died of cholera except the grandmother. A sad love story as well between revati and basu that was never consummated.

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Susan Williams 30 October 2016

I am so glad you translated this into English. I do not know how it read in the Odia language, but it sounds both fluid and heart-breakingly powerful in English. I'm particularly thankful that you did translate into English because I know I take things for granted- - girls in America could always go to school [of course our gender did meet bias when it came to pursuing certain careers such as physicians, [my Mother had to put her foot down to become a nurse because my Father didn't think it ladylike! ]. But doors opened to our gender many years ago and I hope and pray that doors are flung wide open in your country. I have loved learning since kindergarten==learning to read was like opening the universe to me and it hurts to think that there are little girls even today who are forbidden to be who their talents would lead them to be, whose minds hunger for knowledge, who are considered less than men, and are expected to find their fulfillment in serving men. I wish, , , I wish a billion things for the little girls all over the world- - - -I wonder if someone wise could start a foundation that would be funded to bring every girl to countries that would treat them with respect and love and educate the dickens out of them!

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Susan Williams 30 October 2016

A heart-breaking 10, my friend.

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Valsa George 29 October 2016

Though with time, things have improved, there are still 'Revatis' living in our midst...! Not only a girl is denied education and is cut off from the elite society, but her very gender is despised and seen as a curse! Social reformers and women activists are doing a great job to educate girls to whom it is deprived....! Unless there is a radical change in the social and psychological milieu, education and employment will remain a rosy dream to many of those girls living in the interiors....! You have given a life like stature to the Revati of the fiction and she serves as a prototype..... Let us hope that the number of Revati's in our society diminishes year by year....! Great write, Bharati...!

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Nosheen Irfan 29 October 2016

A very significant n relevant write. Based on an old short story this poem resonates with modern times too. Still a great number of girls are deprived of their right to get education. The issues this girl Revati faces are very much relevant today. Your poem gives a powerful voice to girls who cannot speak for themselves. A very soul-stirring write. Kudos. A super 10.

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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2016

Thank you dear Nosheen Irfan for your valuable opinion.

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Daniel Brick 11 October 2016

This is a painful poem but a necessary one. Revati was doubly innocent, first because of her early age and also because her desire for an education was the right cause to fulfill. But even her grandmother had accepted the unfair custom of not educating girls. She was robed of her life but her example gives life to later girls. Hers was the life of sacrifice whether she know that or not.

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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2016

The short story 'Revati' was penned by Fakir Mohan Senapati nearly 100 years back and this story was placed in our Seventh class text book.During Fakir Mohan's time girls were denied education because of the superstition that girl's education was bad for family and society.But today also girls are denied eduction for many factors.Some parents do not think it necessary as the girl will go to in-laws house, and marrying her off to a suitable groom is enough.Some think if the girl gets highly educated, it will be difficult to find a groom for her.Marriage of a girl in our society is very costly as parents have to give dowries to the in-laws house.People spend many times more in the daughter's marriage than her education..People also fear that if a woman is educated and employed, she will be more independent minded and will not obey the in-laws..Women have lesser voice or no voice in important family decisions and financial matters.Even many educated and employed women give their whole salary to their in-laws or husbands and no power to spend their own income.

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