Revolution Poem by Alicia Meyers
Revolution
some people are a distraction,
Our world is coming to a distruction,
Everyone is a corruption,
Needing a revolution.
Government doesn't care,
For the slavory over there,
So many people are scared,
For what's happening everywhere.
Children are starving,
Families are in needing,
People are dying,
But no one is caring.
This needs to come to a stop,
The wrong people are at the top,
Too many are prone to flip flop,
But then I'm just a teenie-bop.
Suicide happens every day,
A lot of people are getting low pay,
Those people want to get away,
Or die today.
What is wrong?
This has been going on,
For very long,
Yet no one is strong.
Strong enough to stop this mess,
It's so sad - it's not even the best,
The wrong people are becoming pests,
But no one will confess.
I hope God will make things better,
For tomorrow to live and today a go getter,
And for people to live in peace forever,
And to have peace together.
O.M.G........FOR THE FIRST TIME I SEE WHAT WE DO IN REVOLUTION AND MY DEAR ALICIA YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT, TRULY IMAGE AND FAR AS I CAN SEE WHAT WE DO IN REVOLUTION AND WHAT WE DO ON WAR IT'S THE SAME ALICIA LET ME YOU TELL YOU THAT YOU ARE A TRUE POET I LIKE THIS PICE OF WORK A LOT IT'S WONDERFUL KEEP WRITING MY DEAR
Very well writtten, I was asking questions while reading, it was a great read.! (:
This straight from your heart isn't? your words are elegant. God is on the throne showing mercy to this world his creation. Keep up the good work my fellow poetess. (8
Wonderful poem, I like it. Friend, can I humbly ask you to read my poem revolution in evolution and tears of a soldier. Please
Great potentials I see in you...great work. Your are indeed years ahead of your peers. I luv ur lines, shows great knowledge of world affairs..kudos
So so great a poem not just for a 15 year old but for any poet. Still wonder at how you managed to match all those lines and yet make sense in every sentence. Lovely poem indeed, it reminded me of Tracy Chapman's 'Talkin' of a revolution' song. Keep it up Alicia.
I love your poem Alicia, you are a very talented writer and i hope you do well [3
i love this poem and you are a great poet.. i add you to my favorites!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/28/2024 11:15:16 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Revolution is not a bed of roses. Bullets or stellar couldn't save our souls. Peace couldn't born from the end of blades and mortars. You care and compassionate enough to say these prayers. Well done! ! ! ! !